Demeter

Hi Hannah! Hallways make echos long and thin like they haven't eaten or been drunken in days. I'd spell it echoes, but maybe it's a matter of choice? Also, I ...

Hi there, WritingWolf! Interesting thoughts on art! It's always fascinating to read how others view different things, in this case art. :) Most people will say things like "Art is ...

Hi Pletta! I liked this and also agree with Pengu that a little more punchiness would make it even shinier, and I think you can achieve that just by compressing ...

Hi there Calla! So unfortunate about the line breaks! Sometimes YWS messes up the formatting -- try and do it again in the actual submitting space and see whether that ...

Hello Lumzy. ^_^ It's a poem with a Catcher reference - of course I want to! Or at least try to. :) I quite like the stanzaness and the scrambledness, ...

Hi there, LiveLoveSaved! Welcome to YWS! ^_^ I thought the minimalistic approach was pretty cool. High school is such a mundane subject somehow that writing anything flowery and verbose about ...

Hi there, Jon! Welcome to YWS! :D I chose this to read because of the title, because I love anything to do with royalty. :P I thought the formatting was ...

Hi, Coco! I’m finally here – so so sorry it has taken such a long time! I’m going to give you a sort of running commentary as I read this ...

Hi there Anonymou5! I'll focus mainly on the rhymes in this review, because that's something I'm quite passionate about! So you've written a rhyming poem - that's cool! I like ...

Hi there, HannahBanana! Welcome to YWS :) Glad to see you're getting started on the site! Also, reviewing other people's work is just as fun as getting comments on your ...

Hi Spanish! Welcome to YWS! :D There is something really appealing about this poem. At first I thought, "oh just another love poem and it's even titled Love", but when ...

Hi there, quietcuppi! I like the brevity of this scene. It's about one moment, one heartbeat, so it is just the suitable length. If it was any longer, it might ...

Hi, Harrington! I quite liked this - you certainly painted a vivid image with the words and it was a pleasure to read. I could really imagine/see the scene in ...

Hi, Ingrid! Rhyming poetry! ^_^ I like it. You created a nice atmosphere with the poem - I felt like I was brought in the middle of the celebrations and ...

Hi, Kay! I really liked the rhythm of the heartbeat in this. I can't remember seeing something like that many times before! I think it made this interesting and cool, ...