DeepCrystal

Jeez Louise!! Sister on sister confrontations are ugly as can be (though many sibling on sibling confrontations are like that to begin with. Harriet/Hunter anger seems to come naturally, though ...

Okay, very intense and fast-paced which I find appealing once in a while. Like SlowTime said, this had way too many characters all introduced in a flurry of action that ...

The woes of a high school dweller. Don't worry, it'll all be over (at least the high school part, life doesn't get any easier afterwards). Why guilt? Does that have ...

I like this a lot. I also liked the rhythm that was expressed in this piece. When I think of the colors, I see how they mean something to you. ...

Okay, I know you said not to say anything about the subject, but by requesting us not too...you inadvertently inspire us to. Just a simple fact of life, like "Don't ...

Hmm, Lycans, mystery, a hunt, hostility, a reasonably attractive setting...what more is there to ask for? I like how you introduced this story, introducing the reader to the setting as ...

Holy moly, Chaser! You have my thoughts provoked to the point that I am questioning each and every one of my emotions. My first thought (and I don't know why, ...

I weep and I weep. Don't take this the wrong way, but I actually wish I had this particular father. He sounds much nicer than mine. Mine was--is--a verbally (sometimes ...

Hmm, I never read a rap before. I don't know what I can offer you in terms of critique. Then again I am tired from a long day's work and ...

Oh my oh my oh my.....Have you been watching The Omega Man? I am Legend maybe? Both are good movies even if they are basically the same story. Charlton Heston ...

Yes, yes lots and lots of envy. Do you need some ice? My freezer is out of ice at the moment, but I would love to get you some for ...

Okay, obviously I am far from the first person to reply to this story, but you gave me some helpful feedback on something I am working on. I felt obliged ...

Free at last! Free at last!! Free at effing last!!! That was epic. Forgive me if you had a different idea, but this sounded like a melodic death metal song ...

Welcome welcome welcome to Young Writers Society. And may the reviewers be ever so kind and helpful to you. Yeah, I was just watching Hunger Games. That was deep. I ...

I really really wish there was an app on this site that allows writers to show a map of the world that they create if they so desire. This story ...