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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 36

    Hi Fortis! *inward groan* I'm still reviewing chapters from November >.> This was a nice chapter. We get to see more of Jay missing home, and I find it kind ...

    Jan 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: The Before - 00

    Hi Mephis! Seeing as I loved what I read of your previous novel I knew that I would want to read the prologue you posted. And I will say this ...

    Dec 31, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Politics, Satire Re: One Way Out- Chapter Four

    Hey 90skid! I haven't seen you around lately so I hope you are doing well! I will still review for you nonetheless and hope you come back soon. This chapter ...

    Dec 31, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Shattered Crowns - Chapter One (Gregor)

    Hi Spotswood! Oh my goodness me, are you trying to kill my eyes >< This was so long. Please, post in chapter parts? It's easier on us reviewers ;) I ...

    Dec 31, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Siege, Chapter two:Failure (part 2/3)

    Hi Alchemist! I have really been taking my time when it gets to reviewing things so I know this is long overdue. I hope this review still is of some ...

    Dec 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 3: The Arrest

    Hi Artemis! I know I am getting through these very slowly but I am going to get there ;) In time ^^ As for this chapter it was awesome to ...

    Dec 30, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: Belinda Cabbotry: The Weak and the Wary (PART 10)

    Hi Willow! I'm here again, as promised. Well, what I can definitely say is that I have a lot more feedback for you when it comes to this chapter. But ...

    Dec 30, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Belinda Cabbotry: The Weak and the Wary (PART 9)

    Hi Willow! My apologies for arriving so late to review! Alas, I am here now even though there is very little to say. In itself it's not because this was ...

    Dec 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 29 Part 1

    Hi Noelle! For some reason when I first heard about the little old lady in the woods, I immediately thought of Red Riding Hood. Which isn't a bad thing, but ...

    Dec 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Typo Alley~E Part Two

    Hi r4p17! Well, it looks like I may have fallen behind a bit here but now I am determined to catch up! I reread the previous chapter to refresh where ...

    Dec 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: The Trailing Echoes

    Hai Timmy Happy review day! Yes, it's me again, continuing on with this vengeance I promised. This is actually a pretty hard review for me to write because I have ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: slipping down in fall-ing rain

    Hai Timmy! Happy review day! Okay, I am far behind when it comes to reviewing all of your things but I am going to come back with vengeance, you shall ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Centuries - Chapter 1.1

    Hi Isha! Happy review day! I am here to try and review a chapter of yours, seeing as it is good to know you are back and up writing again. ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Veil - Chapter 20 Part 2

    Hello Megsug! Happy review day! I am here to leave a review for another one of your awesome chapters. Excuse me if this is merely a comment though, because this ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 28 Part 2

    Hi Noelle! This catching up thing is hard I was really curious about this chapter because I wanted to know what it would be like for Falyn when she saw ...

    Dec 18, 2014


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— Ron Swanson (Parks and Rec)