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Hey Magpie94. Well, I can tell you that was a beautiful poem. I loved it - especially the ending. I think although it's short and about something most poets write ...

Hi Kazzykay. First off, I did like this piece in general. There were just some little things that made it hard to read and understand. Beckiw has already told you ...

Heya Dogs! I see you have quite a lot of feedback already. Glad to know you finally posted it :) It was much better than I was expected and overall ...

Did you delete this? Why?

Hi Qoh To be honest, I only understood the gist of this piece. I was getting confused with the flashbacks and the use of Adriana and Adarria. Those words are ...

Heya Aria, here to review again. Firstly, I think you should keep posting these chapters. The more you post, the more feedback you get and the better it makes you! ...

Hello again AriaAdams! The next chapter! A new point of view! So far Lord Soul has been viewed really negatively, and you've maintained that type of character throughout this chapter ...

Heya AriaAdams I read chapter on so I could understand what would be happening in this chapter more. And I won't comment on grammar since I can see LouisCypher already ...

Heya Writer 2345 Firstly some little nitpicks: Some of your paragraphs are too long, they still look off-putting. Chop it down just a little bit more. And every time a ...

Hey AddictedtoDelusion I liked the meaning you were trying to bring across here. I think Samara1carter pretty much summed it up for me already so I'll try to focus elsewhere. ...

Hey Shoaib I like this a lot. You looked deep into a simply parting and made it seem a lot more heart-breaking and sad. I think you did a really ...

Hey Bhayden I liked this poem. I liked how the title was only explained in the last line because throughout the whole poem I was wondering, focusing and trying to ...

Heya thepurplelover I liked this prologue. It did make is seem like a movie trailer and I think it worked very well with what you've written. I like how throughout ...

Hey Skyy I know you said there was no actual meaning to the poem. But I keep on seeing it. As Shoaib said, about the looking closer. And I had ...

Hey ongoeslife. I liked the beginning of your poem. The use of thwip and the relation between the object and her emotions was a very good beginning. And then the ...