Deanie

Hi Sapi. Deanie here, First off, I really liked the message here in the poem. It was a beautiful little story about the wind-roses, and even if we think about ...

Hi Transcending, You've got some great imagery in there. The whole piece kind of makes me feel floaty and happy and kind of over the moon :) I feel so ...

Hi Barefootrunner! Nice poem you got there. I'm not sure if this was personal story, or you just trying to bring this message across. But it has a good meaning ...

Hey BlueAfrica, Wow. This poem is beautiful. It sounds like a plea and a prayer for forgiveness. Like someone cannot stand who they are and what they've let themselves become, ...

Hi Lyssiekins, This is a nice poem. It's reasonably short, but it's still good! The rhythm and flow and rhyme are almost perfect as well. I'm not too sure what ...

Hey Shinda ^^ Seeing as you posted it I decided I might as well read it here. I liked it. You use emotions very well here, and we can feel ...

Hi there Indie, For a rough draft, I found this poem exceptionally good. In fact, I would call this the final. The rhythm and flow is amazing. I like the ...

Hi lovethelifeulive, I guess your username suits this piece incredibly well! I really liked this poem, especially it's meaning. It meant something to me personally, and the message you were ...

Hi there Space Soldier, This really good. I can feel the emotion that you have portrayed behind this, and the meaning is clear. But I feel like this needs to ...

Hi Auxiira, You are toying with a brilliant idea here. I love the fact that the person is like a paper, with folds. But I believe there is so much ...

Hey there, This is a good poem. It has good imagery in there, and the meaning is plain for us to see. It's not too simple. It's not too complicated. ...

Hi Pink Panther I really liked this! It had a great meaning behind it, and you go that meaning across well. It wasn't too simple, but it wasn't too hidden ...

Hi Tommybear, I'm pretty sure this is good, but I couldn't draw myself to read more than a few sentences. I guess this shows just how much paragraphs as treasured. ...

Hi Quilboar, This looking quite good :) It's something different to what I usually read, and it was intriguing. I noticed the tenses but Barefootrunner has already told you about ...

Hey Imaginatiion, I really liked the beginning of this. I read the first chapter as well, so I could follow the story. I liked it, but the punctuation made it ...