DarknecrosisX

This work is a good bit of dialogue; the personalities of the characters featured are portrayed well, making it much easier for the reader to relate to them, envy them, ...

Hello there, I realise you're new, so I promise not be too harsh. First off, I'm struggling not to become too involved in an ethical and moral debate, so I'll ...

This is a nice, short piece of poetry, symbolic and dynamic in layout, especially with the acrostic of 'Married' down the sign. I don't have too much to say about ...

This certainly is interesting, a good opening that identifies the character for us; a shy and emotional young girl. The description and imagery used was fantastic, especially the use of ...

Ok then, I noticed you were on the front page, so I decided to pop in for a review. Now, I like some of the ideas seen in this, but ...

This is a fantastic example of traditional prose poetry: descriptive, intellectual and well written. What I liked about this is the commanding lines, ordering the opposing character to realise the ...

Hey Alec, now this is why I wanted you to write something: so I could tear it apart. Try to take this with a pinch of salt, 'cause you know ...

Hey there Taylor, here to review and tear your work to pieces! To start off with something good, this introduction is a perfect summary of the plot, albeit a tad ...

I thought I'd check this work out considering it's extreme popularity. At first sight, I must agree with Dreamwalker, this is very grammatically incorrect, even if it was meant to ...

This was a good chapter piece, albeit a little short, but it served its purpose nonetheless. The way you described Ariele's emotions and paranoia was effective and intriguing, especially when ...

Only a quick review here, I've been extremely busy. I agree with Blues, you certainly know how to write in the view of your character; you know how he feels ...

Hello there! This piece makes a very good prologue, albeit a little short and furthermore a little bear in terms of description, but you certainly know where you're heading with ...

Beautiful piece of poetry, stuck somewhere between rhythmic and repetitive, but amazing nonetheless, kind of reminds me of a piece I wrote. Anyways, only one grammatical thing I picked up: ...

Not bad for a first work, but it could do with a bit of improvement, especially the layout; it was odd, and more like a poem than prose novel work. ...

Hey, DNX here, this is a nice bit of work, and I am very much looking forward to what will follow this. As for mistakes: 1. "Corridor's". Try "Corridors". 2. ...