DarkDewDrops

Hey there speakerskat, I really enjoyed this piece. I like the escalation, and I like the way you broke up each sentence. I also thought the formatting for the piece ...

Hey there! DarkDewDrops here :) (Warning: I believe in "critiquing" not "reviewing", but I mean well, I promise. The key is to improve! :) ) First off, I am so ...

I'm back! This was another great read. At some parts, what you write are things I can definitely relate to, along with many other readers - wearing a mask, protecting ...

Hey there! For starters: I love the way you broke it up into sections. And I don't know if you meant to do this, but the whole mirror image title ...

Hey there! Just by the way, I've been obsessed with Percy Jackson since I was in the third grade- I had to wait for the fourth and fifth books to ...

Hey Again! I just read Chapter One of this, and then went back and found this. I love the way the next chapter flows out of this. It is really ...

Hey there Enemy! The format you chose for this went so well along side the story you were telling. It really helped to keep the audience captivated by your thoughts ...

Hi KingLucifer! This is definitely an intriguing piece, and I look forward to seeing where you go with it! But there are a few critiques I have for you. Don't ...

This is extremely captivating from the start. However, over time, you lose me due to the constant commas. A lot of the time, periods can help extend the dramatic tone ...