(To the tune of the Phineas and Ferb theme song)
There's 104 days of summer vacation and school comes along just to end it,
so the annual problem for demigods is finding a good way to spend it...
LIKE MAYBE,
building the Argo II or fighting a Titan, or climbing up to Mount Olympus
Fighting something, that shouldn't exist *ROAR!*
or giving a pegasus a shower
Falling to Tartarus, creating enemies or locating seaweed brain (he's over here!)
Finding the golden fleece, predicting prophecies or driving Annaaaabeth insane (Percy!)
As you can see there's a whole lot of stuff to do
before school starts this fall
(come on Blackjack!)
So stick with us 'cause a bunch of demigods are gonna do it all!
So stick with us 'cause a bunch of demigods are gonna do it all.
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First work i've sat down and looked at on this site. Very cool, I have to admit. 10/10 would enjoy again. I love it.
This.... this is a literary masterpiece lol. This idea hadn't even occurred to me that it could have been done until I read this. Good job.
I especially like the little quips about annabeth and percy near the end.
Gorgeous. Beautiful. A true work of literary art right here. This is honestly the best thin I have ever read. You are a master of the pen.
LOL ok I had to, but honestly this was so great. You fit everything a demigod at heart could want in that!! Its gonna be stuck in my head all day!!
I only have a vague idea of how the Phineas and Ferb theme song goes, and I haven't read the Heroes of Olympus series (though I know a lot about it from the Internet). So maybe I shouldn't review this? Lol!
But seriously, it was good for what it is. I could complain about the use of "a bunch of" (let's just say that I don't like that phrase), but in a theme song/parody like this, I can't complain.
Hopefully you'll write more soon!
Yay! Demigods rule. I wish this was my summer vacation.
Thanks everyone for the comments, likes and reviews! I really appreciate it!
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Perfect. <3
DEMIGODS UNITE! <3
My childhood. <3
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. OH MY GODS. Can I just ask for your hand in marriage real quick? Seriously, this is the awesomest thing ever I have ever EVER read.
I do
Oh. My. GODS!
This is all I could dream for. Phineas and Ferb, Percy Jackson. Everything fit perfectly, nothing to say. It was amazing.
Thank you!
You're welcome, Claire!
I loved Phineas & Ferb, and I still love Percy Jackson, so this was hilarious! Thanks! (Your profile picture though)
Lol same I used to watch Phineas and Ferb every day. And believe it or not I refused to read the Percy Jackson Series until 5th grade where I then became obsessed with it (and I still am). Thanks, and I love pepe the frog
For some reason, I was smirking as I read this. Good job, however! You could've made it a bit more creative and funny, but it's nice as it is, too.
Thank you! I love making people smile
This made me snicker. Nice job.
Thanks!
Hey ChocolateCello here!
I sung it the whole way through, is that bad?
Maybe change the title, "Percy Jackson Song" or even just "Percy Jackson Parody Song". It lets the reader know what to expect.
First line, "school comas along". I'm assuming you meant "School comes along"
Second line, either end with one period or an ellipsis, (...).
Also, I personally like punctuation for the most part so I would suggest adding periods in places like after 'shower' and 'this fall'.
When you put things in parenthesis, I would suggest capitalizing all on them. Usually you don't do that, but I think in this case it would look nicer.
Finally, end with an exclamation point. The second to last line in ended with one but the last line isn't. Adding the exclamation point would make the last line... ugh words... um... peppier?
Okay, done. Loved the song. Write more pjo stuff! (You're obviously good at it).
Ohh and especially loved this line
"locating seaweed brain (he's over here!)"
Just perfect
Okay, this review was kind of sloppy, sorry, but keep up the good work!
-ChocolateCello
Thanks for the review! I fixed a lot of the stuff and will get back to the other things later.
Hey there Claire72! The Silent Bagpipe here to review your amazing, hilarious fandom work!
First off I'm just going to say that I am a major fan of the Percy Jackson series. It is so funny and defiantly one of my favorites, I reread it all the time xD When I saw this tittle, of course I clicked it because Percy Jackson rocks and I wanted to see some of the work of a fan! xD I loved this, it was really cool and I like how you made it. I actually had the theme song playing in my head while reading it. On top of the other songs playing in RL over my headphones =P
I don't really have much other to say, except this was awesome and I am glad to have found someone else who likes Percy Jackson! Anyways, got to go fight some three headed thing, then after that its onto Camp Half-Blood! Seeya!
A fellow fan,
The Silent Bagpipe a.k.a Selina
Thank you! I'm glad to meet another person from the fandom.
Hey there!
Just by the way, I've been obsessed with Percy Jackson since I was in the third grade- I had to wait for the fourth and fifth books to come out... Ah I feel so old!
This is really funny though ^. I would love to know how you became inspired to do this!
Very random and amusing. Maybe you should try writing some sort of comedy poetry or something. It's a good way to begin writing on your own!
Good Work!
-DarkDewDrops
Thanks! I also love the Percy Jackson series (obviously). I really was sitting in my room and the idea of this just popped into my head. Not quite sure where the lyrics came from XD.