DannieInkblotHanson

Reading this poem, I had two main thoughts. The first being "Oh my God, Loki! I LOVE the Avengers!" And the second being "yeah, this poem pretty much sums it ...

I like this! It is a truly beautiful representation of the concept of the division between rich and poor. Granted, the structure was kinda funky and went from end rhyme ...

I like it! I like it very much! Here, I wrote you a review thing! Your character is fantastic, mostly because of how completely realistic he is. By the way ...

Wowzers. This is quite gripping already. Your style of writing is fantastic and really easy to read. Immediately off the bat we feel bad for Hugh. I'm also totally in ...

Good prologue indeed! Quite right. Here is a review for you. I actually really like that they're kids. Most stories here feature teens or older as their protagonists, but it's ...

Look, I read your second installment! Ermahgerd, this is good. I really like where it's going. Your foreshadowing with the Twisted is great because they certainly sound wonderfully spine-chilling. I ...

Ooooooooh me gusta! This is looking really great so far! A fantastic prologue indeed. Your word choice is astounding and your descriptions are wonderful. It gives us just enough information ...

I like this! It's super clever and has a great ring to it. However, your rhyme-scheme is sometimes inconsistent. It may sound better if you had it not rhyme at ...

Oh goodness. I know exactly how this feels. Exactly. People can be so dumb sometimes. I can practically feel the frustrated rage in that last "really?" This is actually super ...

Holy Hitchcock, this is quite thrilling indeed. First off, one question. Are you British? Sorry, I'm curious. And my British friend is the only person I know who calls it ...

Hello there! Here, I shall write a review for you. You have a good little concept going here. I like the idea about the plague. It has real potential to ...

Wooooooooow I like it. Fantasy doesn't usually attract me, but you have done it. Okay, here goes my shpeal. Your character is excellent and very funny indeed. I really like ...

Oh, boy! Everybody loves a good zombie tale! Here are some things I noticed and stuff. Like another reviewer mentioned, the biggest problem with zombie stories is making them your ...

Hello! I am Dannie and here is some stuff I have written for you! You've got good direction with this. I like a lot of your dialogue and things like ...

Hello! I read your thing and now I shall write a thing about your thing that I have read. Here I go. You're doing a fantastic job with character. Right ...