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Re: Life Without Regrets [Chapter Three]
Hey Kanome! Danni here for a review! I am going through these chapters in a very strange order for some reason O.o Ledan screamed from the top of his lung ...
Mar 23, 2018 -
Re: Cocaine And Other Things (Chapter 2)
Hi Rascalover! Danni here for a review! This wasn't as good as the first chapter, but it was still good. Forcing your fathers, brothers, cousins, nephews This part seems a ...
Mar 23, 2018 -
Re: Psychic chapter five
Hey AnimalQueen! Danni here for a review! First off, really nice touch, doing it from David's POV. Great stuff! Like @Kanome, I think David and Charlotte seem to be too ...
Mar 23, 2018 -
Re: Life Without Regrets [Chapter One]- Edited
Hey Kanome! Danni here for a review! First off, your language rating is too strong. Damn and dammit are considered minor swears, so would only need a 12+ rating. I ...
Mar 18, 2018 -
Re: Lyrical Chapter 3: "Everytime"- Simple Plan
Hey LJF! Danni here for a review! Sorry for the delay, I've been like super busy. First off, you need to show more of Michael's feelings. Is he upset that ...
Mar 18, 2018 -
Re: Life Without Regrets [Chapter 4.5]
Hey Kanome! Danni here for a review! First off, this was pretty short, but that's a very ironical comment coming from me, as I do this all the time. Second ...
Mar 18, 2018 -
Re: Psychic chapter four
Hey AnimalQueen! Danni here for another review! You're definitely getting better at paragraphs! I only found a few minor errors. Props to you for that! I picked hip Lucinda Change ...
Mar 16, 2018 -
Re: Psychic chapter three
Hey AnimalQueen! Danni here for a review! First off, maybe rate this 12+ for language as you used s***? Also, there's that paragraph problem again. This really irritates me. I ...
Mar 14, 2018 -
Re: Dear Cocaine and Other Things
Hi! Danni here for the requested review! I willingly admitted I was an addict Do you mean a drug addict? This contradicts the fact that you also said this was ...
Mar 14, 2018 -
Re: Psychic chapter two
Hey AnimalQueen! Danni here for a review! berret That should be spelt beret. honers That should be spelt honours. There were quite a few spelling and paragraph errors in this, ...
Mar 5, 2018 -
Re: Life Without Regrets [Prologue] - Edited
Hey Kanome! Danni here for a review! First off, wow! This is an amazing beginning. Did he really murder his parents and just has no recollection? Or was he framed? ...
Mar 4, 2018 -
Re: Life Without Regrets [Chapter Five]
Hey Kanome! Danni here for the requested review! I haven't read the previous chapters, so forgive me if I misunderstand anything. OK, nitpicks: "Well, I like you too... Inna. You ...
Mar 4, 2018 -
Re: Psychic
Hey AnimalQueen! Danni here for a review! My biggest problem with this was paragraphs. Paragraph breaks happen whenever someone speaks, a new person is introduced or there is a change ...
Mar 3, 2018 -
Re: Wings
Hey! Danni here for the promised review! First off, I love the pictures you added. Really nice touch. There were a few spelling errors in this, I have pointed them ...
Mar 3, 2018 -
Re: Like Swallowing a Vitamin
Hey Dracula! Danni here for a review! First off, whoa! This started off as fairly spooky then got to full-blown horror. I completely disagree with you, this classifies as a ...
Mar 2, 2018