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A very touching story! It very nicely captures the state of so many people in the present. They have nothing to do, even if they want to. The world has ...

Alarming...... But still a very nice poem. Love the rhymes. So many people can relate to this. I feel like when people say they need therapy, they've realised they've just ...

Hey there! I was intrigued by the title, them read that this was about exams. The emotion you put into this is so real, there are uncountable people who will ...

Hey there! I was pretty surprised how it ended. I guess it's coz I haven't read any of your other stories, but judging by their titles, this is pretty much ...

Hello there! Welcome to YWS! It's a very nice short adventure story you've written. I'm from the same genre. You're story is light and since there isn't too much description ...

Hello! Catchy title! I like the way you compared words as ink blots here, it tingles. The bold and enlarged lines at the top act accordingly to your words I ...

Hi there! I should compliment you for the chilly feeling you've been able to create with just a few sentences. From beginning to the end, the creepy feel you get ...

Hey there! Hope you're doing well. To be honest, I was thinking of writing something similar to this, maybe I will one day. This subject is one in which only ...

Hey there! I really like this story that you have written, it feels absorbing and it causes the imaginative tendency to turn at a faster pace. The language is simple ...

Hey there! Love the idea of a French title! Frankly speaking, I really like what you've written. Obviously, it's all true for anyone who reads. I love the fact that ...

Hey there! I found this to have a really interesting title, which indicated the start of a merely simple problem leading up to a murder. That's been exceptionally fulfilled. I ...

You write to the diary, we write to ourselves. I like this writing of yours. I don't think there's any need for changes, it's all good. It's nice to look ...

The story was alright. I really liked the way you stressed about snow:). I liked that you tried to give a description, but it needs a little work. And also ...

Wow, that was something very unexpected from what I imagined. It totally kept you waiting for every next word. I like the way you put a really nice way of ...