Young Writers Society

Fun fact! I never write to diary (except for this message) because I think it knows too much c:

You write to the diary, we write to ourselves. I like this writing of yours.

I don't think there's any need for changes, it's all good. It's nice to look into yourself, you need to know yourself better too. Know what you really want, need, love, all of that gives you not only a better understanding of yourself but also of the world around you.

Overall, really nice piece of work by the way. Don't term this as teen fiction though. It doesn't stick to reality. That's the only thing I think shouldn't be there.

Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),

Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!

Anyway let's get right to it,

Gossip, bluff, indiscreet information and emotional sayings. Whatever goes in those letters they send you, what do you know? Do you judge those sayings that they have told you? How do you feel having teenagers’ lives in the palm of your hand? Whether it is a girl or boy, they will write to you. Do you know who he loves? Do you think the person he loves feels the same way? May I assume that that person is not me?

You make these questions flow in my mind. People in the alternate universes and the one I am currently in, they write to you. Some people call you the utterance of their hearts, some say you are the pleasing record of a cultivated mind and some say you are the mirror of the days of their memories. My question still lingers in my mind, what do you know? How much do you know? How can you be such a dependable, trustworthy thing or person for people to write to you a lot of things? How can I be you?

Can I know the things you know? Or am I just a little weakling participating in society and humanity, I would not handle what you know? Are you the god Atlas, carrying the whole world on your shoulders? Should I be Hercules so I may trick you into experiencing what you do and steal something from you? That sounds evil! Maybe I am evil, maybe I want to know what you know. So you don’t need to answer those questions in the beginning, I could just find out the answers myself.

To make things sound less unsettling for you, we could be friends. Then, you can tell me every single detail in every teenager’s mind so I may understand what goes on it? Most people are different, every person walks a different life than the other. All-knowing Diary, what’s your play?