Cyvain87

Thank you very much for your comment. The meaning you picked up in the piece is absolutely what I intended. I have been thinking about that last line for quite ...

Thank you very much for your comment. The last line has been bugging me too but as the poem says finding the right words to express that that fit is ...

Of course I did not want to state it out loud at the time of writing the piece due to how emotional and intensely raw the feelings were. I like ...

At the time of writing this poem it felt complete to me and it still does. I wasn't wanting to make it too specific or personal to myself in order ...

Thank you so much. As for the punctuation i do not know myself if the punctuation I have placed there is correct but i do seem to remember having asked ...

Thank you so much for your comment. I like going back to this poem on certain days almost in tribute to them.

Well this was quite some time ago and I do see now those parts you pointed out do not fit but I guess what I was trying to do was ...

Thank you so much for your comment. I am glad you can relate to it and hope whatever it is that makes you feel this way improves for you. Be ...

Thank you so much for your input on this poem. The main reason this poem remained unedited for so long is because I literally wrote my mind during the height ...

Thank you very much. I think the power portrayed in this poem i wrote is there so strongly because of the point of the emotional roller-coaster i was in at ...

This is a very powerful piece and I love it! The way you have the old man telling the tale and the young girl listening make it all the better. ...

Thank you so much for your comment. Sorry for people being so mean but I am glad you see the mensing of this piece of writing so easily.

Absolutely amazing! This is so well thought out and I love the wya it shows the two perspectives depending on the direction it is read in. It also flows well ...