CuteJackRussell

Thank you very much, I admit it was a little rushed because the contest is pretty much being judged in literally a couple of days and I really wanted to ...

This was really good and yes we do need Harry Potter!

Thank you so much for your constructive criticism and your positive feedback. I loved hearing your opinions and I thank you all for pointing out some of the little errors ...

I just thought I'd tell you that this is totally incredible! I love your writing style and the langauge you have used is exceptionally good. Keep writing no matter what! ...

Hello Bhayden71207, Your review was really helpful and you pointed out some very valid, helpful points. The line that you quoted didn't make sense because the her, was meant to ...

Also thank you for the like!

Hello SnickerDooly, Thank you for the feedback, I took some of your suggestions and altered a couple of things hopefully improving the original poem. I appreciate the review it was ...

Hehe I helped make that!! :D

yeah i agree it was a bit short but I still loved it. Great meaning and I think you successfully executed the poem how you planned great work keep up ...

I love it! I find it an unusual change from the more popular poetry topics to a more interesting and individual substitute I found myself compelled to read more into ...

I really like it it's cool and I kept reading it over and over again!!! Well Done

yeah I love it great theme. I liked the way you wrote that peice at the start explaining what you meant by 'she', but I think maybe that could have ...

It's awesome maybe you could add a little bit more but except for that I loved it!!! From Me

This great defiantly something to be proud of! You should make it longer because i want to read more of this stuff! Well done

Its awesome TurkishDelightRocks!!!! =) I definitely like the start the most but the whole thing is great. keep writing!!!