Red Anger
Red is of fiery hells
An eternity of anger welled up inside
Anger splashes my hopeless rants red upon the paper
Thanks Renn for the last line 
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yeah i agree it was a bit short but I still loved it.
Great meaning and I think you successfully executed the poem how you planned
great work keep up the writing!!!!
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Short poem, but great meaning. It might be a little better if it was a little longer though, but is your poem.
Red is of fiery hells Should 'hells' be plural? In this instance I think it might not work.
Etirnity of anger welled up inside It is spelled 'eternity', and I believe it would flow better if you added 'an' before the second line.
Of red I scribble my hopeless rants I don't think this fit in with the other lines in the way that it didn't flow like the others, maybe something like 'Anger splashes my hopeless rants red upon the paper'? But it is your poem.
Very good.