Published December 12, 2010
Life can be good.
Life can be bad.
You have to make do,
with all that you have.
You might like to read.
You might like to write.
You might like to ride,
your BMX bike.
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I really like it it's cool and I kept reading it over and over again!!!
Well Done
Short and totally sweet
Keep writing poetry. I loved this!
It's cute xx
Hey cupcake!
Ok, first time reviewing your work! The poem - short, sweet and to the point. Very simple and flowed really well. I really loved the last two lines of the first stanza! Really great! Keep it up and I encourage you to try longer and complex poems!
Best wishes for future writing!
RedLeaf
Hey Cupicake,
so I think that this was a bit short. And by that, I didn't mean the length but the poem's theme itself. It was like you didn't get to a point. You said life can be good and bad, but you didn't demonstrate anything bad--at least do. XD
Anyway, keep writing!
A random review from,
Jash ♥
the first paragraph: Yep. I agree.
the second: Dont get it but its interesting.
Good Poem!
I liked it, it was short, sweet, and simple. I liked the message in the first four lines, very true.
short and sweet, I like it. I'm just not really sure what this poem is about, and (this is probably a typo)but you could say your in the last line instead of you
keep writing, this was good.
-Rayne