Crysi

What? Crysi is writing a review? Inconceivable! In all seriousness, I clicked on this because a) I'm always interested in mental illness stuff and b) the title was really intriguing. ...

Hey there! I'm Crysi, and I'll be reviewing your piece today. I have to admit, at first I thought I knew where this was going. "Yeah, yeah, the protagonist will ...

Hey there! I haven't reviewed in a long time, so cut me some slack. First of all, this seems like a stream-of-consciousness poem. Do you know what that is? Basically, ...

This is amazing. No, really. I'm not sure I can give a very detailed review here, because it just comes together so well! I especially love "Round and round / ...

Hey Angel, I found this very interesting. It has a sing-song feel to it, which I like. I kind of imagined the narrator asking some sort of higher being, or ...

Wow! This was adorable, Jabsy. I just watched Tangled for the first time the other day, so I started to get my stories mixed up, haha. I love all the ...

Wow, I feel old. I was in the 7th grade when it happened. I cringed every time I saw a plane fly overhead. I had classmates who were building towers ...

...What's your point? It seems like you're just listing various titles for "god." I'm also confused on why you're not capitalizing God, since I'm assuming you're talking about the Christian ...

I can understand why this may not be "appropriate" for a college entry essay. Because it's such a controversial topic, you're making this decision personal. While that can be beneficial ...

The thing is, this could apply to any religion. I understand the frustration with the Christian-hating -- I used to be Christian, and felt the same way you do. However, ...

Yes!!! Alternate fairy tales are the best! I love it. It's got a "Wicked" feel to it. Definitely stick with it! Most people aim for the big ones like Beauty ...

I am currently about a C student. Used to be straight A's, then I hit college. Earned two F's and three A's last semester, hah. Still getting back into this ...

Hello! :) I'm trying to critique a little more, and as I don't have much time, this was the perfect length for me! Word of warning: I prefer to not ...

Hey Kev, I think you're confusing bipolar disorder with a split personality disorder, or at the very least, borderline personality disorder. (Most people do.) Those who are bipolar aren't necessarily ...

Good to see you finally putting the Suicide King to paper, Dono. Or screen, whichever. I always knew he'd have a lot of potential, and this first installment confirms that. ...