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Re: Bondage
I wish I understood poetry a little more so I could give you a nice lovely review.... But I really liked it, it was very detailed for such a short ...
Tue Feb 18, 2014 4:56 pm -
Re: But Love Hangs So Beautifully
You are a beautiful writer. I know you said you wrote this in less than an hour and to me that is simply amazing. The piece was well thought out ...
Sat Dec 07, 2013 2:23 am -
Re: Inside the Cookie Jar
:o
Sun Dec 01, 2013 12:59 am -
Re: Death as Viewed by a Child
Thank you so much for the review ^^ But I don't understand what you're asking me to change
Sun Dec 01, 2013 12:43 am -
Re: A Halloween I'll Never Forget
There's a difference between giving constructive criticism and being rude.
Sat Nov 30, 2013 5:46 am -
Re: To Be Watching
That is funny yet still creepy..... Very descriptive.
Sat Nov 30, 2013 5:21 am -
Re: I write because...
That was completely beautiful. A lot of people are not in touch with their feelings but you were able to describe yours in full detail. Surprisingly, you embodied how I ...
Sat Nov 30, 2013 4:36 am -
Re: Mating Tears
The names in this story were very different. Are the characters angels? Well, whatever the case may be I really liked it.
Fri Nov 29, 2013 5:10 am -
Re: Ahainea
Wow... I read the description on your profile and thought it sounded interesting. Not at all how I thought the story would go. It's very interesting, to say the least.
Fri Nov 29, 2013 4:53 am -
Re: Death Wish
Okay, now I get it. :)
Fri Nov 29, 2013 4:14 am -
Re: Why
I really like this story. It was gripping and very emotional. And for it being so short, I do feel as if the plot was reached successfully. Keep on writing ...
Fri Nov 29, 2013 3:07 am -
Re: Panic Attack
Oh that's so good ^^ At first I didn't know what was going on because the terms were so professional. Well, I wouldn't have known if it not for the ...
Fri Nov 29, 2013 2:03 am -
Re: What Lies Inside
I hear you on that.... Looking nice can make you feel good but that isn't the most important thing in life by far.
Fri Nov 29, 2013 1:43 am -
Re: Death as Viewed by a Child
Thanks so much for your comments ^^ You made me happy
Fri Nov 29, 2013 1:28 am -
Re: Death as Viewed by a Child
Thank you for feedback. I'm not very good at poetry usually and I was trying to churn out poems for class... this is the only one I liked but yes ...
Fri Nov 29, 2013 1:26 am
