CreativelyWritten

I like it :) A lot. I can't promise you I actually know what idea you were trying to get across but I have a guess. I'm not very good ...

This is beautiful. I like how you make it sound so.... for lack of a better word, poetic. Honestly though, had I not read the title I may not have ...

I liked the positive parts of this. The parts saying not to let people's words get to you and telling you that you could potentially save lives. Those parts I ...

This story is full of desperation until the very end. It has a silver lining then. I wanted to say that if she actually did all these things (the match ...

Oohh that's deep. And it's really really sad. One thing I wanted to say is that in her replies/thoughts (the unbolded words) you should have quotation marks around what she ...

I think the repetition of sky in the second line was a mistake. I wasn't sure if it was a typo so I decided to put it in this comment ...

What?! That ending was so totally unexpected. It came out of nowhere. I guess I should have expected nothing different from George.... The first part was really sad. Even the ...

Well that was just..... really depressing. Obviously that's the mood you were trying to get across.... at least I hope so. I really liked it although some parts were kind ...

This is pretty original. Most songs and poems are about love and accepting a person's flaws and everything. But no, this person is just saying I don't want to be ...

I liked this story. It was depressing but maybe someone will read it and realize that telling somebody could help. I also really like you're skipping to different parts, the ...

From the beginning this story made me sad. It made the pain of those with loved ones in the military real. You see all of Lia's thoughts, not just the ...

Did you write these yourself? If so they are wonderful! I can just picture a post apocalyptic world taking over with one man attempting to rise above it all. I ...

Nice poem. I myself could not get into the flow, rhythm. But I am not a poetry person so don't take that to heart too much. Loved the last line.... ...

you can use rhyming and still give a powerful message. Not only that but this semi-short poem tells a story! When you were talking about losing wings I thought of ...

ooh that's nice :) I don't much see what the first part has to do with the rest.... but alas don't take that to heart because I am very bad ...