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Re: The Tale of Mona Lisa
Omg that was really good, I really enjoyed reading that since its been such a long time since I have read a decent horror story! I really liked how she ...
May 6, 2015 -
Re: The Faceless Angel - Chapter 1
Woah this is really creepy and I absolutely loved it! "The darkness felt so real, so tangible. It was more than just the absence of light, it was mysterious and ...
Nov 26, 2014 -
Re: The Nightmare Man
Wow this was really dark but I absolutely loved it! I'm really into horror stories and dark things so this has cheered me right up! Everything was described well and ...
Nov 26, 2014 -
Re: A Forest Stained Red
I really like this even though I have to admit I am a little confused! Has the wolf possessed the man? Or has the wolf possessed the young girl or ...
Nov 19, 2014 -
Re: Blood Magic
Wow. This was insanely spooky but it was so frickin' good!! I was wondering what might have happened to everyone at the end but this was not something that I ...
Nov 19, 2014 -
Re: Him
OMG this is really good and as I was reading it I was thinking "I wonder where this could be going?" and I really did not expect this. I really ...
Nov 19, 2014 -
Re: Fear's Heart
I really like this story and the ending gave me chills! I think that you might need to look at some punctuation at the start, like maybe putting a few ...
Nov 19, 2014 -
Re: Can I Cry?
This poem is so good and full of emotions, it makes me feel like you truly put yourself into this poem as well as being honest in your words. I ...
Jul 2, 2014 -
Re: He's My Reason
*sniff* Wow, that's got a lot of emotion in it and I can kind of tell where the poem is coming from. Also, I can clearly see in my head ...
Apr 6, 2013 -
Re: Insomnia
Hii, this is CrazyWriter! Okay, first of all, I just love all of it, even if my mum killed me for ignoring her when she was shouting for me! "The ...
Apr 6, 2013 -
Re: The Tree. (You Left Me.)
Awww, that's reall sad, but I love the steady flow to the poem as I read it!! The poem painted the perfect picture in my head to help me enjoy ...
Apr 6, 2013 -
Re: Did you blink?
Oh my god, awesome and I really want to read more! God, I would love it if you made more or a sequel or something, tell you what, try putting ...
Apr 5, 2013 -
Re: Down the rabbit hole
WOW That was absoloutely amazing!! I love the idea of Alice being insane or too imaginative! "In future Alice, watch your step, there are way too many rabbit holes, you ...
Apr 5, 2013 -
Re: The Grave
Uber creepy!!!! I love it! Espeacially this bit: their souls withering into the soil, it really started to paint the picture in my head of a grave, all lonely and ...
Apr 5, 2013 -
Re: Regicide
Hey! OK, I really loved the line :the street lamps outside glowed no light It makes me think of lamps making things darker instead of lighter, which adds to the ...
Apr 5, 2013
