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This is good. There are some errors, but overall the story line itself isn't half bad. I'm a little intrigued about the war they are talking about, and would like ...

This is awesome. It has a really nice flow to it, as in it all fits together really well. I'm not the best at poetry, but I can see and ...

This is really depressing. The writing itself is good, though there are a few spelling errors. The ending really confused me; it sounds like he killed himself at the end ...

Talk about a mind blown. You did everything perfectly, from the lack of errors to the beauty of itself. (Oh, look, I'm getting all inspirational here.) Of us all being ...

Very, very good writing. You kept the same pace ( or whatever you call it ) by using words that held the tone. It didn't seem like it was about ...

Awesome writing. My opinion is that it might be about a circus guy, and your using angels to describe it. I'm probably wrong though. (not the first time) I liked ...

the writing is good, and how do i put it? Very... mysterious. I'm going to take a shot in the dark and put my two cents in: 1) She's at ...

Oh, where to start? So many spelling errors! No offense, because I'm going to assume that you used a note pad on your computer, or something that doesn't offer spelling ...

Kinda depressing. But, what are you gonna do, when its about RAPE?! I thought it was about some jealous feud out first, and then I thought it was about her ...

I'm honestly a little confused. Maybe its just me, but I have no idea what is happening. When I think I get it, I read the next line and I ...

This is glorious. I love it. Your choice of words don't exactly describe what is happening, but instead lets the readers fill in the blanks, like a teaser. Repeating 'bells' ...

UPDATE THIS UPDATE THIS UPDATE THIS!!! (you will probably notice that I tend to do A LOT of caps.) So far you've added mystery, which makes the reader want to ...

I must say, AWESOMELY AWESOME. So good, a sunset would look like glitter set next to the awesomeness of what you just did. (See what I did there? Don't worry; ...

It was confusing in the beginning. I saw what you were going for by leading the reader on, and that was good. You are awesome at doing imagery too. This ...