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Crazy here with reviews for CreativiTea~! “There are too many!” Carson yelled out as the enemies came within range, Carson attacked the bandit first by lashing out with his big ...

Crazy here with reviews for the green team~! As fast as I could make my fingers fly, I looked up on wikki leaks (yeah, its still up and running) - ...

Crazy here with reviews for the green team~! I understand that this is just a taping, but I think it would be better of you added some meat to it. ...

Crazy here with first review for the green team~! Its short and simple, and well written. I can understand what its about, and that is a lot coming from me. ...

"I need you to do something for me" - remember to end sentences, including when they are speaking, with a period, exclamation mark, and etc. "She washed from the shadows.." ...

Very inspiring. Though I'm not really sure who you are referring to, even if you are referring to any one at all. There are a few places that are a ...

Wow. This is very good, and from what I can see there are no significant hiccups in your writing. Its pretty consistent, though I would have loved for this to ...

I'm not too good at reviewing poetry, but here I am. Okay, the first thing I noticed is that only the last few stanzas rhymed. Second thing, the whole deal ...

Cray cray here with reviews for the red team! "I walked back and forth for a quite a bit of time thinking about my life and how almost everything in ...

Cray cray here~! Anyways, the writing is very good, though you can't use first person (I, you, we) when writing in third person (she, he, her) unless you have things ...

Not to be mean, but this is just describing a plot. Not only are there errors, but the fact is that this isn't even close to a story. I would ...

There are actually plenty of mistakes, all throughout the story. If its because you type too fast, then you need to slow down. True, its not the worst I have ...

I can't really tell much from this, besides the fact that 'me' has a horrible life and wants to go back to Israel. Out first I thought it was awesome, ...

You did really good with this, and the theme was pretty consistent with the beach. Maybe its just me, but I didn't see as much of a connection to dreaming ...

Wow. Not only am I inspired by this, but I think I might actually watch Lord of the Rings. I was a little dubious at the beginning, because I didn't ...