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Original Text: I’d seen them around school of course, they were everywhere. Fixed Text: I'd seen them around school of course: they were everywhere. Original Text: I shake hands with ...

Original Text: It was brown, with ribbing defining its texture, the only decoration was the young girl perched upon it. Fixed Text: It was brown, with ribbing defining its texture; ...

Crazy's gonna be reviewin' your work now. Nit-picks: "no, not even then would you succeed." This is just a capitalization error. But now that he was standing upright, she saw ...

I'm here to give you an Inc[red]ible review! Some minor errors: I scowled and stamped into the shower. - I'm pretty sure this is just a typo, where it would ...

Crazy's gonna review, now. :) "Her first memories . . . were of the yellow eyed men." - It would be 'man', not 'men', unless both brothers have yellow eyes. ...

Crazy here with an Inc[red]ible review! (heheheh.) Nit-pick: "I can’t remember when the last time I smiled was, I never thought I would, until I met you that is… it’s ...

Well, this sounds very interesting. There wasn't any errors from what I can see, and it kept me reading from the start. But remember that if you do continue this ...

I'm going to be reviewing this today, so I'm going to start off with nit-pick errors. "His body was thin and short no taller than 5’ 6”." ~ You need ...

I'm here to review your work!!! Let me start off and get the nit-picks out of the way. "If they catch Prilla, she would simply be an object to them, ...

Crazy here, with reviews for the fire flowers!!! Here are some nitpick errors: "It dawned on her that he was the only thing she couldn????????t her, they were in a ...

Crazy's here with reviews for the Fire Flowers~!!! These are the only two errors I found: ".. But who count .." For this, it would be who'd instead of who. ...

Crazy here with reviews for the Tyrants~! "They were sturdy, thick, wide, and dappled with darker patches amidst the sea of shimmering metallic gray." - There wouldn't be a coma ...

Crazy here with reviews for CreativiTea~! Something noone else could have only me. - You need to put a space between 'no' and 'one'. My dreams of having a big ...

Crazy here with reviews for CreativiTea~! But the thing that got me thinking was the fact that she had not money to pay for his service? - There wouldn't be ...

Crazy here with reviews for CreativiTea~! To the sparrow's right is a windowsill with open windows to a beautiful little, green garden, leading him to his freedom. - You don't ...