CorruptedArrow

Hey Corrupted Arrow here with a review! (The Comma Police is here! Anything I say here is just constructive criticism. If i offend you I apologize in advance.(I will try ...

Hey Corrupted Arrow here with a review! (The Comma Police is here! Anything I say here is just constructive criticism. If i offend you I apologize in advance.(I will try ...

Hey Corrupted Arrow here with a review! (The Comma Police is here! Anything I say here is just constructive criticism. If i offend you I apologize in advance.(I will try ...

Hey Corrupted Arrow here with a review! (The Comma Police is here! Anything I say here is just constructive criticism. If i offend you I apologize in advance.(I will try ...

Hey Corrupted Arrow here with a review! (The Comma Police is here! Anything I say here is just constructive criticism. If i offend you I apologize in advance.(I will try ...

Hey Corrupted Arrow here with a review! (The Comma Police is here! Anything 1 say here is just constructive criticism. If I offend u I apologize in advance.(I will try ...

Hey Corrupted Arrow here with a review! (The Comma Police is here! Anything I say here is just constructive criticism. If i offend you I apologize in advance.(I will try ...

Hey Corrupted Arrow here with a review! (I'm jut pointing out a few things that I find that are in a wrong order or grammar mistakes. I've become the comma ...

Hey Corrupted Arrow here with a review! This is really good. I can't find any grammar mistakes, and your commas are in check. Never mind on the last one I ...

Hey CorruptedArrow her with a review! I'm not sure where you went with this but I'll give my best go at it! "The smoke makes our eyes water. Look into ...

Hey CorruptedArrow here with a review! I also think about these types of things as well. This can hit home for people(Me) or it can hit a wall. You make ...

Hey CorruptedArrow here with a review! I am a victim to bullying, I know where this comes from. I agree if someone is being bullied, talk to someone. For the ...

Hey CorruptedArrow here for a hopefully short review! You have made a good start here if you wanted to keep going, but you may have a different field of view. ...

Hey, CorruptedArrow here! I just want to say that if this applies to you IRL you aren't alone in the Game of Life. Anyways back to the story you have ...

Hey CorruptedArrow here! You have a good start, to your poem. "Stay in control, Don't listen to your head, You know it just wants you to be dead." There is ...