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Hey, +1 reviewing as I go along, a bad strategy but...yeah. Here goes nothing! Nitpicks: 1) I know you have an appointment with me and I am SO very sorry ...

*finishes crying* Okay, so the punctuation is flawless, as is the way you expressed content, provided imagery, and had a way with words. You are a very talented poet, and ...

Well, this was an interesting idea for a haiku! Honestly, if you follow all the rules with this sort of poem, it can't go wrong. I hate to inform you, ...

Well, what can I say? Vocabulary was excellent, but shouldn't there be commas between A LOT of these me's and meows and so forth? That's my only nitpick xD. Also, ...

Well, I know this doesn't fit the premise of a "review" instead of just heaps and heaps of praise, but here you go: *hands heaps and heaps of praise.* Now, ...

With any luck you will think this is a stroke of genius Needs a period at the end. Otherwise, this piece made me burn inside. That might sound weird, but ...

So I'm taking a wild guess here. Is this someone special MasterGrieves? Just a wild guess. Nitpicks: The respect you show me as a person – makes me confident; and ...

So, I thought this was a cool poem with a snazzy concept. I don't know if it worked so well as a short poem, however. First off, period at the ...

Well, Pinkie, we chatted about this and I respect your decision. Um...yeah. I'm not going to ask you not to quite exactly, because I do understand your point here. Wattpad ...

Okay, wow. This really, really scared me. *Takes deep breath.* I will try to review this as best as I can. So, chronological order. The title: Excellent. No suggested revisions. ...

Don't know song, don't know band, loved it. Awesome. Great. Coolest music video ever :) Nitpicks: I don’t think, Sam. Shouldn't this be: I don't think so? Either that, or ...

Well, this was interesting. I agree with mephisto...Jesus, you need a nickname. I apologize if you mind, but I'm going to call you mephangel. So, anyway, I agree with mephangel. ...

I love this SOO SOOOOO SOOOOOOOOOO much. Right away, I just want to give you 10/10 because EVERYTHING was SOOOOOOOOOOO FANTASTIC. You have amazing talent and you wield it well. ...

Wow, I really loved this. It took me a moment to process the unique rhyme scheme, but I got it and there will be no need to comment anymore on ...

Welcome to YWS!!!!!!! So, some nitpicks.... 1) I don't get why Love is capitalized, but loving, love story, etc. are not. I suggest not capitalizing love because it doesn't contribute ...