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I honestly don't know what to think. I'm either going with Darth Timmy Jake or Strangelove. One of them's got it, and I can't decide between them.

There are hundreds of writers on this site pouring their sweat and blood into their work, slaving over it for hours until their fingers are sore from hammering on the keyboard, meticulously editing it over and over again, and then finally, after all that effort, posting it on the site to help improve it even more. Sometimes, their hard work shows, and their piece gets a spot in the literary spotlight. That's great. I'm happy for them, because they worked hard and they deserve it.

And then I see something like this in the literary spotlight.

I'm not saying that you didn't think about this for a few minutes, change your wording, play with the title, things like that. I'm saying that this obviously took so much less effort than some of the works that are still smouldering at the bottom of the Green Room. It really irritates me when something like this shows up, and especially when people make an attempt to review it or do thorough, in-depth analysis of it. I'm not buying it. While this certainly does have many different interpretations that one can wheedle out of it if they look really hard, it's still silly and kind of demeaning to all the other, much more thought-out works on this site.

Basically, I second everything Strangelove said. I won't be marking this as a review, because it's not, but it'll probably be automatically changed to one. Sorry about that, this really is not a review.

I will also not bother replying to any comment you make, because you have shown yourself to be very belligerent about negative feedback on other reviews, and I do not wish to argue with you.

I hope to see some real work from you in the future.

Was this a reference to the song Awesome to the max by Ephixa? if so, then you sir, are a legend.

Hey TiggaBiscuit, Strangelove here and I have a quick review for you.
Pardon me, as I'm slightly rusty from reviewing, but I will do my best. I don't exactly get the punch line for this.

Awesome... Awesome to the max.

Hey Tigga!!

Ok so I accidentally clicked on this, but I'll review it anyway! First off, I agree with Biscuits, you should definitely bracket the title.

Also, this has got to be the best piece of literature I've ever seen on YWS! Its just so detailed and well-written. Have you thought about maybe publishing this.. whatever it is? I think you could definitely make some money from this! You put a lot if effort into this and it shows! Good job! XD

Keep up the good work!
-ForsakenAngel

Okay, Tigga, I am going to try my best to review this here. I can do it.

First of all, I have an actual legitimate suggestion. I think the title should have square brackets like this - [Your title goes here] - rather than the ellipsis it has just now. Also, you could maybe change the colour of the text, maybe fade it to grey, to make it look like one of those things where you click it to enter a username or password and it goes away.

I think this is a very unusual work (obviously) and I think you could maybe play around with the formatting a bit more. I don't know what exactly you could do. Maybe change the colours a little or something. Oh, or have the letters get larger towards the end of the sentence.

Well done...?

Hello, Tigga!

Now I sat here, and read all of your reviews and comments over several times, and I don't really know why I am here writing a review... It just kind of boom! out at me, demanding to be reviewed. So here I am. I shall attempt to review this piece.

With the title being how you placed it, Your title goes here..., I think that its intention (and your intention) is to tell the reader to make up their own title. What do they think is the title--and what belongs with the rest of the work. So your reader needs to fabricate whatever title they think necessary for this work, and apply it there, or just leave it how you did so in their mind. That works too, because it leaves open what is awesome to the max and open to the reader's mind to think about what is awesome.

It isn't confusing, its more like a puzzle. But I think it wasn't meant to make people think as much as just be confusing and not understandable, really. No, not understandable. Random. This piece was meant to be put on spotlight, and its because of its total randomness. No one can think of what this piece is referring to, or what it was meant for.

And I think that is a good thing.

One thing that I think you could have done to just simplify this is remove the first awesome. It's a small thing, but I think that your piece could improve if you removed the first awesome... and left it to the rest of your piece to say what you want. The slight redundancy does change something in your work, and you are stating the same thing twice when you have awesome in their twice. Very small, but perhaps worth looking and thinking about.

So all in all, I think this was very well done. It obviously took some time to think of the appropriate words for the piece, to make it what you wanted, and give it the right message. I would compliment you on the flow or descriptions... but this piece has none. Short, and to the point.

Well done.
~Darth Timmyjake

Hey Chips here to review this "Awesome...Awesome to the max" work of yours.

I'm obviously a fan of experimental and creative poetry, so I quite liked your title and your poem. I don't think it wasted your points since you took the time and thought to write it and from the likes you have it was appreciated.

Since we aren't necessarily told what the "Awesome" thing is and your title doesn't give the reader much of an idea of what your poem is about, so perhaps subtly relating the title? . I have concluded that this work is a mystery *Nods*. It can be interpreted in many different ways. So good job! Keep the experimental works going, it makes poetry interesting.


--Chippy

I was just wondering when something like this would end up on the literary spotlight. Too bad talented poets don't end up here.

Well, this was interesting. I agree with mephisto...Jesus, you need a nickname. I apologize if you mind, but I'm going to call you mephangel. So, anyway, I agree with mephangel. If you could tell us just what is so awesome....awesome to the max, this would be even more enjoyed by us readers. I also agree with mephangel on how if it was "Awesome. Awesome to the max." It would have more effect.
Uhh....so I don't know quite what to think of this. What's so awesome? What does your title goes here relate to what you wrote? Is this just spam? You must have points to spend. You do know Christmas in July just happened like a day ago right? Not trying to insult this work, just wondering if you could explain to us/me how this is exactly....a piece of work.
Overall rating......uhhhhh........
+1

Hey TigagaBiscuit!

Soooooooooooo. Hmm. Interesting piece of literature! This certainly made the time before going to sleep a lot more interesting. Although, it would be more "Awesome to the max" if you could, I don't know, tell us what's awesome? But that's just my opinion.

Another piece of opinion that you really don't have to listen to : I thought that it sounded a little more cooler if you said,

"Awesome. Awesome to the max."

I don't know, I'm not saying that what you have right now isn't cool, it really is and I love it, but maybe try to add words?

Awesome writing!

Keep on writing, Mephis

Hey, TiggaBiscuit! It's Mr. Powers here, for another fun and exciting review. Today, I'm gonna review this... what.

WHAT?!

Okay, the first thing that comes to mind is that Birdman song "Money To Blow", because you obviously had some. Instead of gifting it to some deserving guy (like, say... ME!), you blew it on this here one-liner.

"Awesome... Awesome to the max."

WHAT?!

I would accuse you of trolling, but this affects nobody but you.

In the end, I give this a very favorable review. But not because of what you wrote. You obviously couldn't care at all about this piece. Unless you totally messed up and accidentally wrote a tweet instead of a piece of literature.

This gets an A+ rating because I get points from it.

Enjoy yourself, and please, focus on the writing.

Yup... uh huh... that was something... Okay I'm confused. I'm laughing but I'm not sure why. Am I just not poetic enough to see what's happening here or what... okay well. Yeah. Now I'm just kind of stretching this out so I can get some points off of it. This certainly was interesting. Keep up the good work I guess. This is the highlight of my day right now. So yeah. I just earned points for rambling on like this. BRAVO!

Okay, I wouldn't say it was completely wasted. But one question...what is the title about? Does it have anything to do with the sentence you wrote? Just wondering. Other than that, I think it was good. Focus on writing a little more.

Hi.

So I don't think you wasted points on this at all.
Nu-uh. I think you have encouraged expression here in a very positive way.
I could tell this work was going to be experimental from the title and the description.
Sometimes, I thing these works get mistaken as a "waste" because people don't understand the point you're making.
However, I really clicked with this.
Having said that, I don't know what story I would put into this. Hee hee.
But it's sure exciting to think of the possibilities and try and find out.
Good job and agree, that this is :

Awesome... Awesome to the max.

Should I smile?
Should I not?
You wasted 250 points,
What's wrong?

haha mate it was funny. I really expected something really surprising and guess what, it was surprising

Should I say something? Yeah, I have to. You are "Awesome... Awesome to the max."

Good morning. Cheers,

Gooooood morning! Tulip Jere to give you a review!

I smiled seeing this. And honestly, it is just to amazing to even spend a long review on. It is just so heart lifting you know to see. Thank you for sharing!