ConverseFireGirl

This is a beautiful poem. Seriously. Brilliant. I love the imagery that you are producing and it really goes straight to the reader and it feels as if they are ...

This is a very nice poem here, wallflower16! :D The main thing I like about this is the length, it's short, and yet well written with meaning behind it which ...

Aha, sorry for the late review, I just saw your picture, followed you, decided I needed to look at your work before following you so here I am. :P Okay, ...

This is a very nice poem! Welcome to YWS by the way, it's great here! :D Right, onto the work. I love your wording. Seriouisly. It's brilliant. "concrete jungle," "between ...

Hey there! Very nice poem. If this is seriously the first one you've written since you were eight... then you are seriously talented. :P Right, onto the review! So, let's ...

Oh my- WHAT IS THIS WRITING THAT IS SO MAGNIFICENT?! This is BEAUTIFUL, I literally could not stop reading this, it was amazing! You've done a fantastic job with getting ...

This is a good short story which intrigues the reader, when I first started reading, I kinda forgot I was reading and just was sort of... absorbed into the story. ...

This is seriously amazing! :O :D You really do deserve to be in the spotlight. I really enjoyed this poem because it was so relatable, as pretty much everyone on ...

Wow, this is seriously fabulous! :D I bet this'll get the the spotlight, as it's so well written! My favourite bits were probably: "Marred the sky like broken pencils" "Swallows ...

That was a twist in the story! This is a very short story, and yet all throughout it, I was convinced it was her husband or boyfriend she's been living ...

Hey there! Converse here for a review! :D So, this is a really good piece. I can see absolutely no misplaced punctuation or misspelt words, so great job. Your points ...

Is this a chapter? I think that on average, the smallest chapters are about a page long or more, this doesn't give us much detail or character description in just ...

Hey there! Converse here for a review! :D Right, so overall, this is yet another good piece. The speech was in no way boring and it was well thought over. ...

Wow, this is totally amazing! I, as a gamer and being quieter than most in my class, can totally relate here, which means that you've done a great job at ...

Hey there yet again, fortis! :D This poem was magical. The title, and the content were both so immersing! The only line that sounded a bit awkward to me was: ...