ConfusedGlasses

Hello there! Confused here to leave a review! Okay, so, I agree with MaryEvans about the brow narrowing and flexing thing. But I don't agree with her about the paragraphing ...

Hey @megsug! Guess I'm back for a review. I can understand pretty well how the things are stringed together through the chapters. Because I didn't read the previous chapters I ...

Heyya! So I'm not gonna drag this. I haven't read the previous chapters and I can't tell you I will. But I'll review this all the same. This chapter is ...

Hey, congrats on the new chapter! Okay so I'll be as short as I can. There are some minor typos but some majof grammatical mistakes. You might wanna fix them. ...

Aww! That's so sweet and thoughtful! And of course we all sympathize with you honey. Cause look my chapter3 was just stupid. And yes, we all know the feeling when ...

Confused Glasses here for a review! Okay so congrats on completing another chapter! Yes, you're doing pretty good so far. and I would've complained about how Asteria's thoughts seem incoherent ...

YO! Confused here for a review! I don't know what to say. Because this is so damn good! Okay. I sort fell sad for Asteria. Even though I am a ...

YAY! Congratulations on completing another chapter Your Highness! I have to say you sort of captured the image of Frey just like I imagined him. And Emma too. By the ...

Confused here for a review! Its sad that I didn't make it while this chappy was still in the green room, but oh well. I AM SO...... on my gosh ...

Hullo! I sorta don't know what to say. But I'm gonna try to review anyway. It's pretty good so far. I can actually relate with Asteria on the first part. ...

Hey! Confused here for a review! Okay so it took me so long cause I took the time to read the previous chapters. I like the story so far and ...

Hi there! Confused for a review! This is a very interesting piece. I like it. I like how it tells us so much about the world they live in. Its ...

Hey! You never told me you posted another chapter! Never mind. So, yeah I read it and it's pretty good. But you know somehow this "girl gonna kill you" thing ...

Hey there! So yeah I read the whole thing and I fell its pretty good. Like Laure said you can develop your characters a lot, but you probably knew that ...

Hey there! Here for a review again! Now, You have made this little piece quite intriguing in itself. And yes the magic has captivated me. Yet again. But I think ...