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The villain will always be the villain if the hero tells the story.

  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: Coffee Shop

    Omgomg. This was a great read and had me excited and wanting more since it was quite short. The part that made me most excited is that last few lines ...

    May 26, 2024
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Spiritual Re: we left our bodies with the earth

    Woooahhh people hold your horses….this is great!! The raw emotion and the desperation yet slight almost…jealousy portrayed is amazing and of course, the lowercase poetry is mind-blowing! I love ho

    Apr 7, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Cloudy mind

    Woahhh firstly, WELCOME to YWS!!^^ I’m certain you’ll love it here because I certainly do, the people here are lovely and welcoming. Let’s dive in to the poem then shall ...

    Mar 23, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Pre-NaPo Poem: March is Marchin' towards April

    Wow first of all, I LOVE the art and secondly this poem is honestly beautiful and it’s so good it made ME sad even though I’m extremely happy right now(except ...

    Mar 22, 2024
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: peaches

    Woahhhh, I myself, would say I’m quite the romantic but extremely shy and wow this really healed my inner romantic. DAMN THIS IS AMAZING, HONESTLY. :D I love how you ...

    Mar 21, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: ​Something I need to confess.

    Woahhhhh Ellie at it once again!! Your poems always leave me speechless(in the best way)! Everyone on this site has a unique way of writing but your poems are always ...

    Mar 21, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: ​A poem I write in the middle of the night.

    Wow Ellie I love your poems so much, they’re always beautiful and unique in their own way and sad and meaningful too. I love how it shows the comparison of ...

    Mar 21, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, Culture Re: Who Am I.

    This is wonderful work as usual Ellie! There is so much to say yet so little! I love how at the end after all the “imperfections” shown in the poem ...

    Mar 20, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: My First Poem Ever

    Woah! This is wonderful and simple and I saw the context for this piece and I can really relate! I’m a great student but quite problematic at home to be ...

    Mar 20, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: You deserve smiles like stars.

    Wow. I smell severely underrated writing with a touch of rose water!! This is beautifully articulated, as usual Ellie, I love it! The first stanza is bewitching as it is ...

    Mar 10, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Always mine; never yours.

    That’s so deep and it’s short and sweet but in the circumstances of the piece I guess short and bitter? I love this since parents can be our best friends ...

    Mar 7, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: A girls guide to being pretty in college.

    This is amazing Ellie, the emotion I feel like you’ve written this from a personal perspective…I feel like we’ve all felt like this at some point-some experience it more than ...

    Mar 4, 2024
  • Poetry » Literature, Fantasy Re: Mirror, Mirror

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    Sorry my comment got posted twice and I can’t delete this, yay. Have a good day/night!!

    Mar 4, 2024
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Chocolate Chips as a Means of Fixing Friendships

    This is so creative and such a realistic way(in a sense) of describing and imagining these situations which many of us face at least once in our lives! I love ...

    Mar 4, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: ​Your trauma made you stronger.

    This is so accurate and people always say ‘what doesn’t kill you, makes you stronger’. From parents, to children, teens, adults and everyone basically. We’re always told this even if ...

    Mar 4, 2024


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