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The villain will always be the villain if the hero tells the story.

  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Yet every version of who I was is trapped in forever.

    Hey Ellie!! How are you?? ^^ Dropping by for a review on your gorgeous work! Let’s get into it, shall we? Firstly, I love how heartbreaking and emotional you made ...

    Jun 7, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: a certain kind of unawareness known as blindness

    Hiii there! Coffee here to drop a challenging review on an interesting, talented piece! Hey Herb!! How are you?^^ Now, back to the topic! JeeEZz, this was hard to read ...

    Jun 7, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: EARLY HOPE

    Hey, this is Coffee dropping by to leave a warm review to soothe your aching bones! First of all, I love how short and simple this is, straight to the ...

    Jun 7, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: A Haunting Desire

    Hey there! Coffee here to swing by with a cup of steaming, comforting review! Let’s get into this wonderful piece, shall we? Firstly, I LOVE the whole piece, I’m a ...

    Jun 6, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Euphemism

    Hey this is Coffee dropping by to leave a review! I love how the poem sounds, it flows together really well and sounds nice when I read it in my ...

    Jun 5, 2024
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Narrative Re: hellifiknow

    Hey this is Coffee, here to support your poem with a nice review! First of all, I LOVE how you wrote it about a song, and the song is great ...

    Jun 4, 2024
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The Five Senses of Obsession

    Hey this is Coffee dropping by to leave a humble and quick review!^^ First of all, it’s lovely!! You’re really good even though you might not think it! I’m a ...

    Jun 4, 2024
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: Plea of a child taken by Laughing Jack

    Hi there! It’s Coffee pouring by to write a comforting review for a wonderfully sentimental piece! First of all, I’m shocked this work has zero reviews, it’s honestly great!! I ...

    Jun 3, 2024
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: Try to Light a Match in the Rain and Other May Poems

    Hey, this is Coffee dropping by to leave a wonderful review for a whimsical piece and try and stay in the race!! I love this so much, I love poems ...

    Jun 3, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Thank you YWS!

    Hey there it’s Coffee dropping by to leave the sweetest review! This is your sign to do one thing that makes you happy today. ;) Woah, this is so sweet! ...

    Jun 2, 2024
  • Short Story » Health, Realistic Re: i can't talk to my mother anymore

    Hyyyy, this is Coffee swinging by to drop the warmest possible review! Grab a nice beverage(please drink coffee) and read a book but before you do that, read my review! ...

    Jun 1, 2024
  • Poetry » Health, Dramatic Re: 3AM

    Heyyyy, this is Coffee and maybe you should grab a nice beverage as you sit down to check this site and catch up on stuff! Now, onto the review! Overall, ...

    May 31, 2024
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Dirt Nap

    Hi! This is Coffee and I’m here to drop a review for your amazing piece of work! Firstly, I love how concise and detailed it is yet it’s not pages ...

    May 29, 2024
  • Short Story » Satire, General Re: You think you want to be a writer? No you don't.

    To be clear, you didn’t seem angry at all in that whole piece. Well, instead I imagined “you” jeering at the reader at some points but not in a mean ...

    May 29, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Fraud

    Hey this is Coffee and I’m here to drop a review!! I love this poem a lot it’s really short and insightful in its own unique way and honestly great!! ...

    May 29, 2024


Besides, if you want perfection, write a haiku. Anything longer is bound to have some passages that don't work as well as they might.
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