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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Your Beauty

    hi @Phillauthet its jay to leave a review and stop by lets get started with your work First off when i read this lovely poem i was thinking that everyone ...

    Sep 29, 2021
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Dragons

    hey @felistia jay here to leave a review on your work that is amazing!! lets get started First off i love the way you have it edit like that as ...

    Sep 29, 2021
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: what do you want

    hey @soundofmind here to drop off a review on one of your works!! lets get in to it First off @soundofmind what i had read one was when you doing ...

    Sep 29, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 9.1

    hey Harry its jay here to leave a review from your good chapter i love!! First Harry my favorite character in the story was Harry and Aria and Daisy and ...

    Sep 29, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Fall.

    hi Ellie its jay here to leave a review first off Ellie all i have to say in this poem was Ellie you did a pretty good job with this ...

    Sep 28, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Survival: The Escape, Chapter 8.5

    hey harry, jay here to leave a review on what i read on your novel, first off Harry all i can say is you be having them good novel chapters ...

    Sep 28, 2021
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Only U

    hi jay here leaving a review here~ first off this was a good lovely poem i ever read like i have to tell you what was my favorite line in ...

    Sep 28, 2021
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Fairy Tales: 7-9

    hi @IamI jay here leaving a review for you first off in the short story it reminds of a disney movie Cinderella cause when you say fairy tale thats all ...

    Sep 28, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A Note to A Butterfly

    hi @NivedaJames22 its jay here to give you a quick review on what i read on your poem!!! first off NivedaJames okay so far at soon when i read this ...

    Sep 28, 2021
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: bitter pill

    hey @soundofmind jay here to give you a quick review on what i have read in your poem!!! First off soundofmind at soon i read this poem i im like ...

    Sep 28, 2021
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: growing-down

    hi @queenshadowgem this is jay here for a review cause it was a lovely poem i read so here is a review from you @queenshadowgem okay this what i got ...

    Sep 27, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Fall.

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    hi Ellie its Sadboyjay here for a incoming review the first time i read this good poem Ellie i liked how you got it and i give you tips what ...

    Sep 24, 2021
  • Short Story » Health, Realistic Re: The lost blood of love

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    hey i am here wit a review First off the lost of blood sounds like vampires lost all there blood of love to me yeah it sound like vampires is ...

    Sep 20, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 11.2

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    hi harry heres a review from your short story and believe me it was a good poem First harry your story seemed pretty good to me as soon i read ...

    Sep 20, 2021
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Fairy Tales: 7-9

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    hey!! its me here to write you a review about your story about a queen and Masque first i would say is the characters be giving me disney vibes like ...

    Sep 20, 2021


I wondered why we put villains in our stories when we have plenty of them in real life; then I realized that maybe we wanted stories where the good guy wins.
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