Cloud_Stepping

Overall I found the poem very rigid, not much flow to it and there was not much imagery to carry the poem, it seems very text book as if you ...

Really like the image of some times i find myself secluded amongst the crowd thoughts taking over my mind, of times I once had Its very to the point which ...

Really nice poem, short sweet and good questions asked.I think they are all question you need to answer yourself in yours life before you can find the will to express ...

I really enjoed this poem it is quick and easy to read and actually kind of left me a bit in despair at the end of the poem but thats ...

Pretty short...i assume you were going for effect. it definatly does give an effect being so short but i think you should wait until more comes to you and add ...

I really enjoyed this poem, very nice imagery and nice descriptions. She stood alone, silent in the ruins of her own surrender; I really like that line in the ruins ...

Brilliant effort and i like your imagary alot, Also the descriptions were very good and very accurate for such a situation to be real. I would say pay no mind ...

I really enjoyed this piece it definatly captures the imagination and i felt like i was holding my breath during your descriptions of underwater and it was very sweet how ...

I really like these two pieces, the second one is probably my favourite but seriously you should post more on this site because i really enjoyed reading your kind of ...

Nice symbolism you definatly aimmed, fired and scored. I really enjoyed the fact that nature and pleasant things dominated the poem and the constrast of war being dropped in at ...

Yeah sorry i agree with liz and miya.There is just no feelings your left with at the end of every line or even stanza that trully digs down to the ...

I like... its very nice poem you paint a clear picture of the house for me...small brown house with a black door and black spear like rails outside, it sits ...

Really enjoyed this poem....nice length in the sentences leaves perfect room for internal rhymes which you have 2 or 3 of and also adds drama to the line "the father ...

i really enjoyed it very nice comparrison i thought about you being abused by men and the cliffs being abused by the sea...well atleast thats what i got from it....i ...

I relaly enjoyed this epic poem some parts were harder to read than others such as "After minutes of rest, the strength he did make, To take a deep breath ...