Claeren

I really liked your poem! It reminded me of how I sometimes feel. Not to sound too redundant, but I agree that the first stanza is kind of weak. Also, ...

Hi Hannah! I'm Claery, and I shall be your reviewer for today! ^^ Silken birds in crystal trees sway back and forth in waxen breeze preserved with trace of antique ...

Awesome work! I really like your imagery here, it created a really cool picture in my head. However, like niteowl said, you really should put some order into how you ...

I like this, I really do. Like Rosey said, you should probably try a little free verse instead, because of it's "freedom of speech". *starts laughing* Hehe! *suddenly serious* No ...

Nice work! I like the originality of this poem, it really is one of a kind, even if the message is a bit dark. I have to agree that the ...

Awesome poem, it really has a dramatic flare and sense of reality to it. Oh and Music Lover? I tend to do that too, so your not alone. ^^, *laughs ...

Hahahaha! That was hilarious! I hear my mom say stuff like this all the time! I hear it sooo much that I could become a wife right now if I ...

Wow...that's like...wow...I'm speechless! How do you do it?! Amazing! X) A few things though: Rhyming/Rhythm: It was a bit off in places, which kinda threw me off, such as in ...

I don't know where you plan to set this - what century, I mean. Because, even though it has the whole 'forced-marriage-ladies-in-waiting-nobility-kings etcetc,' the dialogue and narration reminds me o

I really like this. I mean, I really like this. =) There are a few problems though. Spelling/Grammar - There are a few instances where you misspelled something or got ...

This is quite something. I like how you portrayed everything, it really made it feel real to me. Also, I like how you create a sort of haunting feeling about ...

These are all really good! The same mistake happens in all of them, and that's the rhythm, but it's still pretty good. Also the story is great as well, but ...

This is very good. Just a few corrections in bold: I'm waiting... I'm... this doesn't really make much sense to me when you put these periods here. At least it ...

This is a really excellent piece. The only mistake that I could see was this one: “This plan must not fail, Despian. I will brake the habit this world has ...

This is really good! I've put some corrections in bold: The History Textbook I was coming home from school one day, Passing the park where the children play. Listening to ...