ChubakaWooky

I like how you have pointed out the flaws of some humans. I myself am a poet who loves to create satires that do the exact same thing. I agree ...

This is a very impressive poem. It portrays the fact that you control how your life will be and no one else can control that. It also has an essence ...

Hello! This is a very great poem for someone so young. I think you will have a beautiful life of poetry in the future when you learn about all of ...

I really liked this poem. The first line I probabaly liked the most because of the indirect imagery (I don't know what that is really called but I like it). ...

I agree that this is a very great poem. I love how you are showing how imagination can bloom from the smallest seed (the seed being the line), it really ...

This is a very creative poem for a 14 year old. I'll bet you are above average when it comes to poetry in english class! Though it was very hard ...

The bluntness of the poem is wonderful. Though, the rhyming adds a type of cuteness to it that may not b what you want. I suggest, to have a consistent ...

I, too, agree that it looks like a paragraph. I've been bullied for a good portion of my life and I love that you are pointing out one of the ...

I'm new to the YWsociety so I may not be able to provide a valuble review. What I noticed is that in the first stanza, you write that he "never ...