ChocolateCello

Hey! ChocolateCello here! I have to agree with the last comment, I read this like a poem oppose to a song, but that doesn't really matter, it was still great. ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! Welcome to YWS! So I skimmed over the last review and they pointed out all of the grammatical errors that I caught. I don't feel the need ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! So, I'm not really sure if this can be called a review but... You did an amazing job with this. I, personally, couldn't not write a proper ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! Just a few minor things to point out. First off is your punctuation. Some places you are clearly missing periods or commas, some places it's more a ...

Hey, ChocolateCello here! Okay, so I don't have a lot to say, not even sure if this can be considered a review, but here's what I'd like to point out. ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! I really like this. You captured this experience perfectly. Over the summer, I've gotten into the habit of getting to bed around two in the morning, and ...

Hey ChocolateCello here! I sung it the whole way through, is that bad? Maybe change the title, "Percy Jackson Song" or even just "Percy Jackson Parody Song". It lets the ...

ChocolateCello here! I really loved this. Everything was described beautifully. You really seem to have a talent when it comes to simple, yet very detailed descriptions. Your vocabulary too! The ...

Hey, ChocolateCello here for a review! Okay, so I really loved all the emotion in this. I could really feel the pain that the speaker felt. I would like to ...

ChocolateCello here! I see that you joined yesterday so... Welcome to YWS! I loved this work. It was very emotional and well written, though it is filled with minor errors. ...

ChocolateCello here! AHH Percy Jackson fan! *Highfives* So I loved the poem, it was great, but there were two line that I felt threw off the rhythm a bit. "And ...

This isn't the usual type of things I review but it really caught my attention. This was written with a lot of emotion and it really reflected onto me. I ...

ChocolateCello here! So I have a lot of very strong opinions about societies view on people so I'll do my best not to rant. First off, I would like to ...

I really loved the emotion in this poem and I can say I've had a similar experience to this one described. I thought the lack of capitalization displayed emotion too, ...

ChocolateCello here! I really enjoyed this poem. It was really well written and I'll definitely be checking out some other works that you've done. (If you don't have any other ...