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  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Ten Negative Signs That You're A Writer

    Name: ChocoCookie Occupation: Student. Writer. Yeah. :D

    Aug 18, 2013
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Other Re: The Diary of the Sluttiest Virgin - Chapter 2

    You're very welcome. :) Ah, changing it into a diary entry would be a little difficult, wouldn't it? Because you already started it with a diary entry. I suggest, you ...

    Aug 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The Captain's Prediction

    Ah, haha. :D Okay! And you're welcome. ^^

    Aug 16, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: i never lernd to spel good

    Now, that is so cool. ;)

    Aug 9, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: The Past (1) *Revised*

    You know... I think I would advice to just ignore that part. :) Let it be as it is. ^^

    Jul 1, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, Literature Re: Fear

    Oh my. Quoting's went wrong. >.

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: A Master Who Toyed Me

    Thanks for pointing out the nitpicks. I knew something was wrong... So, this review approved to be very helpful to me! So, thank you, again! (: I did change some ...

    Jan 23, 2013
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: Nellie

    *little appropriate.

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Till death do we part

    I know I messed up my editing. >.< Sorry about that. :S

    Dec 27, 2012
  • Short Story » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Fallen Angel

    Thanks for the review! I cleared up the confusion when the knife comes out and stabs Helen. And yeah, I'll try to weave in all those details next time. I ...

    Oct 25, 2012
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: Infected part 1

    Oops. I mean't " and sat there ". Typos. >.

    Sep 2, 2012
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: Infected part 1

    Oops. I mean't " and sat there ". Typos. >.

    Sep 2, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Oblivious Hearts: Chapter 2

    Thank you, again for the advice. Again, highly appreciated and was of great help! Sometimes, I make mistakes with the tenses a lot. And the typing is so annoying so... ...

    Sep 2, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Oblivious Hearts: Chapter 1

    Thanks! :] I've re-edited it now. Your advice was of great help! ^^ And about Margaret, actually Tiya was renamed. Flora's sister's name was Margaret but I changed it. I ...

    Sep 2, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: Start Life With A Style

    Solvy! Thank you so much! :] I love you.

    Sep 2, 2012


As a former (and rather excellent) liar herself, Aru knew that, sometimes, speaking the truth felt like wrenching a thorn out of your side. But doing the opposite meant pretending it wasn't there. And that made every single step ache. It was no way to live.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Nectar of Immortality