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Hi Magic! Now, I wouldn't say I loved it nor would I say it was not confusing at all. It has actually left me with lots of confusion and questions ...

Hey Eternity! (: Nice poem you've got here, such a realistic poem. Sort of reminds me of myself. ;) When I check out the other poems of your's, I realized ...

Hey Firepen! I loved this poem! Seriously, even I hate Broccoli. I just hate it and wouldn't DARE to touch it. :S But anyway, in this poem you didn't lack ...

Hey Rainy! I loved it and there was a lot of creativity in the writing. ^^ There was a lot of darkness, and that cursing of love which was marvelous! ...

Hey there! :) Nice poem since its giving out a really nice meaning. But one thing I can't understand is, why is so spread out? It was really romantic and ...

Hey Murmur! :) This poem was like more of a story written poem. :S And the lines are like hugely big which doesn't come in professional poems. Also, this poem ...

Hi Adam! (: First, I must say this was a really nice poem though a little confusing. But I loved the way you've used some Italian and some French here. ...

Hey Emily! :) I loved the title of the poem, all about war and that anger and sorrow. There was a lot of feel to the poem and yes! The ...

Hey, Alliyah! (: Nice poem. I definitely like it when writers write about war. Its a really good message, quite different, I can say. ^^ I loved the way you ...

Hey Ikerot! I'm here to review! :D So, I found it rather very interesting. Especially the girl, who's blind. Its a very different stories from what I read from because ...

Hello Georgina! :D You have a wonderful story here! :) And you are an amazing writer. You've got a great flow of writing and I just wanted to read every ...

Hey Amie! :D Good poem, you've got here. ;) Its lovely and it explained lots of things here. This was different, from what I read. :) What I'm really happy ...

Hey Demi! :) Nice, poem! It was sad and... Well, emotional. I loved it. Though, it was very repetitive and the arrangement of the paragraphs aren't even. In a poem, ...

Hi Nomad! :) So, first of all, I like the poem. ;) It was good though... You need to work on the poetry paragraphs and some of the punctuation. Also, ...

I love this poem as much as I love you.