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Hey :) Lovely written poem you got there! But, you see, you really got to work on you're capitals! :S Abilities of the poem: *Amazing Poem. *A meaningful Poem. *It ...

Hello Xreigon! Waddup? You're poem is so touching :') And you know, the title 'Waves of Death' is good :) It's pretty challenging and goes with the poem. Keep it ...

Hello creativityrules :) Nice Poetry. It was Dramatic, Narrative and helping the world to be a happier place =) Especially the 'Shh. Listen. Can you hear that?' Suggestions: #1: Shh. ...

Hey Cammie! xD Waddup? ^^ I think you need to work on the stanza. But it was Lovely! :D Corrections: #1: I’m up early, Way before school. To watch the ...

Hey :) Lovely written. It touched my heart. You should write more Romantic Poems ;) Now for the corrections: #1: You had me with, two words, two words. Why are ...

Hey :) I think this poem is great! Love it! ;) Anyway, I think you're awesome and you should keep writing :) And the poem's really powerful ^^ It made ...

Hey Radiatelove23! :D Well, I think poem's fine but a little confusions here and there. I find myself sitting in the dark my door is locked- "My door is locked" ...

Hey ;))) I think this poem is awesome! :D A very meaningful poem and it does slip away from our hand within a blink of an eye :S Anyway, the ...

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It's good getting back our memories :) I loved it! ;DDD Very nice ^^ My favorite was the first and second last one. They were funny... Giving added details to ...

Hello :) You're poem is beautiful but I think I felt some places were flat. You used beautiful words and that is what a writer really needs. I know I ...

The Poems Fine. But as the first post said, It's so repetitive >.< Anyway, it was Fine. So tired so can't explain the mistakes. Guess it's already said. :) Would ...

You're cover is pretty interesting :) Like it :P Darn it! I am so not going to win D: -- Cookie ^^

Hi Temi :) Here's as you requested :D You're story is just as much as you're trying convey a message like my story 'The Story Of Casey's Life' :) It's ...

Hi Alliaaryn5665 I think you're poem is quite... Well, all I can say is it's just 'ALRIGHT' Not Good, Bad or Excellent. It's just.. A pass mark I guess if ...