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Re: In Secrets & Shadow - Part 1.1
Heya! It's the chiravian here to review your work today. So the first thing that I wanted to say is that this piece is an absolute treat. I entered, saw ...
Aug 31, 2020 -
Re: Capter 1
Heya, it’s the chiravian here for a review! It's been a long while since I've reviewed, so excuse me if I'm rusty. And as a disclaimer, I may be harsh, ...
Aug 31, 2020 -
Re: Tremble- part 1
Hello! It’s the chirave canicthus here to rescue this work from the green room! Tremble’s an interesting title, but I don’t understand why it’d be used. I believe that instead ...
Apr 26, 2018 -
Re: Divinus
Hello, it's the chirave canicthus here to review your work! The title is very interesting, and reminds me of Divine or divining as an act. It makes me realize magic ...
Apr 26, 2018 -
Re: Equivalent Worlds - Prologue
Hey! It’s the chirave canicthus, here to review your work! I’m going to be going through all that you’ve got up so far, so tell me if there’s anything in ...
Apr 30, 2017 -
Re: Stillborn
Hello! It's the Chirave Canicthus here to review your work on behalf of the Spoopy Skeletons! I really like this piece. In the very beginning, I didn't realize that this ...
Oct 30, 2016 -
Re: Coward's Battalion - Prologue
Hello! I'm the Chirave Canicthus, and I'm here to review your work on behalf of the Spoopy Skeletons! I really like this piece. Throughout it, you hold a constant tone ...
Oct 30, 2016 -
Re: Through the Window
Hello! Tis the Chirave Canicthus here to review your work! Nice, nice, nice! I was afraid that this was going to end up being a really racist piece, judging by ...
Oct 30, 2016 -
Re: A Moment of Perfection
Hello! It's I, the Chirave Canicthus, here to review your work! I really like the title of this. I was unsure of what was going to happen in the text ...
Oct 30, 2016 -
Re: Dear Buzzfeed
Preach! Good Evening. 'Tis the Chirave Canicthus here to get this thing out of the green room! Well, I'm not going to lie. I agree with a lot of what's ...
Oct 30, 2016 -
Re: Unknown- Chapter One
G’day, this is the Chirave Canicthus here to review your work! I like the title, and I’m surprised that more people haven’t been reviewing because of it. It still feels ...
Feb 28, 2016 -
Re: The Cult of Wolves
Hey! It's the Chirave Canicthus here to review your work! And I'm really darn happy with this. I mean, this is one of the only stories on the YWS that ...
Nov 16, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 1.2 Nice to Meet You
Hullo! This is the chirave canicthus here to rescue this work from the black hole known as the "green room." Holy dang! I actually really like this. I couldn't be ...
Oct 25, 2015 -
Re: Late Bloom- Prologue
Bonjour! Tis I, the Chirave Canicthus, here to review your work! I've had this one bookmarked for a while just in the special case of Revmo, so this is one ...
Sep 11, 2015 -
Re: Coldware (Part 1: Software) -- Chapter Seven
Hahaaa. It's ChiravianSkies here again. Really sorry I completely forgot about this. I'm back now, and plan to catch up throughout the day. :) Well this is getting interesting. I ...
Sep 11, 2015
