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Hey! So for starters, first thing I noticed here is how your whole entire piece is just one, huge paragraph. For me, I like to see works organized into paragraphs ...

Besides what the person below said to me, I in fact think that you're actually going somewhere and that this idea isn't bad at all. It's interesting, unique, and you ...

Hey Marrissa here leaving a quick review! So I definitely enjoyed how this poem went, it changed moods quickly to the guy trying to play the girl but the next ...

This is great! I really like your imagination and how you explained how death looks like to you! I can't help myself but ask, is this a real experience you ...

Hey Marrissa here leaving a quick review! So I like the idea you're getting here with the poem, but I can't help but ask, what is it about? I don't ...

I clicked this poem because I'm a super big fan of love and romantic poems, haha. Your poem isn't what I expect it to be, its very rare but in ...

I like the contrast and comparison going on between beautiful and ugly. Your poem seems to be really simple ye the message is shown to be very meaningful and powerful. ...

I really like the way you write, it's very casual yet unique. Good job with the story! I hope you can continue this one though! It has a very good ...

Hey Marrissa here leaving a quick review! First off, I'd like to say take off the bold text. I've learned from my experiences that bold text distracts readers from reading ...

Hey Marrissa here leaving a quick review! First off I like to say I love this poem. It's very unique and something I would not expect by simply reading the ...

This poem kind of confused me... but I liked it anyways! Haha I enjoy reading things that make me think more so that's always a good thing to have! Good ...

Your poem is definitely different than what I expected from the title. I love poems, stories, etc that have that effect, it just interests me more. I really like how ...

Hey! Marrissa here leaving a quick review. Must I say this is a very interesting poem! I love how the mood changes halfway through also representing the "other side". I ...

Hey! Marrissa here leaving a quick review. Must I say this is a very interesting poem! I love how the mood changes halfway through also representing the "other side". I ...

Hey just posting a quick review here! LOVE the idea with the protagonist being a dancer and her goal to become better. I am a dancer myself, and the title ...