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Re: David Gemmell
I have never heard of David Gemmel. In fact, I have never even read any fantasy in my whole life--well, I read King Arthur and The Chronicles of they count? ...
Jan 9, 2005 -
Re: Mannequin
The make-believe of her own reflection Seeing ugliness in beauty And uniqueness in conformity A mass-produced store-front dummy Pretending to be one of a kind. This five lines, seemed to ...
Jan 7, 2005 -
Re: Random Late Night Christmas Rant
This is the result of me writing when I'm tired, when I've had a lot of beer, when I'm pissed off at my friends, when I feeling pretty lonely, and ...
Jan 7, 2005 -
Re: New Story...need title! :)
Even though others said they laughed, it was somewhat humorous in some smart parts. However, it sounded like you were trying too hard to make the reader laugh and not ...
Jan 7, 2005 -
Re: Slayers: The Ruby Eye
I have never read anime books/stories. If they have anything to do with learning Japanese, that's probably why I haven't shown any interest...but anyway, I would like to give realistic ...
Jan 7, 2005 -
Re: Regrets *1st post on here* lol that isnt the regret!
‘Kelly Ryan, I’m glad I came,’ ‘I’m a drug abuser and recently anorexic too,’ ‘I have no clue what to do,’ ‘I have one friend she’s sitting right here,’ Very ...
Jan 7, 2005 -
Re: The Man at Station Four
I know this may sound totally weird, but for some reason, this reminded me of Dr. Seuss. On a more advanced level, however. But consider this a compliment! Dr. Seuss ...
Jan 7, 2005 -
Re: Agnus Dei
I wholly agree with Crysi. However, I find myself connecting, as well but in an unusual manner. The topid is very original, and not what you would normally read. I ...
Jan 6, 2005 -
Re: Lies
The things you said in this paragraph--I mean-- poem [excuse me], were true and this is the part they I enjoyed most. However, it just didn't seem to flow like ...
Jan 5, 2005 -
Re: Boys of Blue
I agree with Sam--it is provactive--I guess, in a small manner. This poem was irretating to me though. You were basically playing with the reader's mind. I was also dissapointed ...
Jan 5, 2005 -
Re: OK this is kind of stupid...lol
Not my style, and somehow I didn't necessarily feel that I could relate or a connection of some sort. The poem itself was odd and unlike anything else I have ...
Jan 5, 2005 -
Re: jindabyne
Not a very ordinary--analogy; I guess you would call it. However, it was interesting. I picked out a couple of things that I would like to remember. But I do ...
Jan 4, 2005 -
Re: Laying on the Floor
well, in my opinion, the word 'belly' just takes away from the seriousness of the poem. i hate words like that--of course, this is only my personal assessment so dont ...
Dec 9, 2004 -
Re: disseat
not good? if this isnt good nothing ive ever read is! this is a beautiful poem and it almost made me smile...something i dont do authentically very wasnt sad and ...
Dec 9, 2004 -
Re: Due to popular demand a Doki Doki follow-up
hm...very intriguing...thats all i can really say...intriguing. when it comes to stories, however, im not necessarily good with commenting and suggesting. however, the way that the characters talk see
Dec 9, 2004
