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  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Asexual growing up

    AMAZING POEM!!!!! You have brought something new to my attention. I will admit that I have not heard of this before.. It's good to have learned this, especially in such ...

    Sep 20, 2014
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Narrative Re: I Feel So...

    I'm just going to make a quick review, short and sweet. These lyrics are amazing!!! When I write songs, I don't always focus on the rhyme, but the flow of ...

    Sep 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: How do I explain it?

    I thought this poem sounded like it was Shakespeare!! But I don't think that really worked to your advantage.. It seemed like the form of it was too old-fashioned and ...

    Sep 20, 2014
  • Other » General, General Re: ...

    I liked that you wrote a song based off of someone asking you a question about your dream superpower. I've never thought of that.. I liked that your superpower is ...

    Sep 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Even Though

    Wow... You just took virtually every thought in my head and wrote it down.. My head is a scary place to be; I hope you're okay. I love this poem!! ...

    Sep 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: i watch you rain everyday

    I really like this poem, there's just a bit I have to pick on. The lines in each stanza is inconsistent. You jump around from 2-4 lines each and I ...

    Sep 19, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Yours

    I love this poem!!!! I feel where you were going with this.. You wanted to show how complex one's heart can be, especially when someone is in love. I always ...

    Sep 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Wonder Why I Hadn't Cried

    This really hit home for me.. I'm currently crying while writing this... So far this year, I've lost 4 family members, one I just lost Monday morning... This year especially, ...

    Sep 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: A Word of Advice

    I thought this was soooooo inspirational!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's really made me think of my choices, to stand out or fit in? It also reminded me of a poem my middle school ...

    Sep 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: I Never Want to Be Beautiful

    The fact that you just brush off what "society' thinks of you and other people's opinions makes you absolutely Gorgeous!!! Never forget that just because you have acne or don't ...

    Sep 19, 2014
  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Don't Hold On To Me

    I loved these lyrics!! I really think this song has potential, it just needs a bit of work. I think the first half is really strong. The second half seems ...

    Sep 19, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Pressing Through

    I absolutely LOVED this song!!! I felt that it was soo relatable!! I felt like you were writing this for a certain person in particular.. I felt your feelings and ...

    Sep 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Satire, Lyrical Re: You Can Hate Me but Not as Much as I Hate Myself

    So this is my first review on here.. We'll see how this goes, okay? Okay. I thought that this was a very relatable poem filled with the truth that comes ...

    Sep 18, 2014


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