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Hey there, Cheetah here to review your piece. This was very well written. You kept me interested the whole way through with the language and dialogue. I also liked the ...

Heya, Cheetah here to review your prologue. Interesting. This was a short prologue, which is okay. Prologues are often short. The thing is, though, there's not much to go on ...

Hello, Cheetah here again to review your 6th chapter! As always, I enjoyed this installment. Now, to review! What I liked: 1) The dialogue was exciting (at the end of ...

Heya Aravis, Cheetah here to review chapter 5! This was an interesting one for sure! I like how you handled the aftermath of Asenath not being chosen. The way her ...

Hello, manisha. Cheetah here to review your poem for you! This was so emotional! I could feel the sadness in the poem. You said you wrote this during a CLASS?? ...

Hello Aadygirl! Cheetah here to review this story for you! I liked this. It was short, simple, and sweet. I especially liked the bond between Tanuja and her sister. They ...

Heya dbrick! Cheetah here to review your piece! I really, really liked this! It was upbeat and clever, which made it fun to read. The rhyming was spot on, most ...

Hello again Silverlock! Cheetah here to review your chapter! I really enjoyed reading this chapter. There was a perfect balance between, dialogue, thought, and explanation. One of the techniques you ...

Hey, Cheetah here to review your piece! I think this would be a good children's book! It has a beginning, middle, and a satisfying end. Sometimes that's hard to do ...

Hello Holysocks! Cheetah here to review your story. This was good! It was simple and enjoyable to read. I especially liked the part at the end where everything repeated. Whenever ...

Hello again! Cheetah here to review! As I was reading this I was thinking of all the twist endings you always use. I crossed my fingers, hoping there'd be another ...

Hey there! Cheetah here again to review chapter 4! Wow, I must say you really have a knack for twist endings! This one was great. I was so absorbed in ...

Hello! Cheetah here to review your piece! I really think this was a great chapter! As Frosting and Bubbles already said, your ending was excellent. You treated it in just ...

Hello, Cheetah here to review your prologue! This was so intense! I liked all the action you used in this. My favorite part was definitely when Myka realized it wasn't ...

Hello Salem. Cheetah here to review your poem. This was so emotional. You're a truly fantastic poet. The most emotional line, I think, is here: I'll believe it when I ...