Chaser

Disclaimer: I have not read the previous chapters. That said, this is pretty exciting in itself. Okay, so the first order of business is style! I liked it here. It's ...

Disclaimer: I have not read the previous chapters. Well, I'm not entirely sure what's going on, but I think I get the gist of it. And I must say, it's ...

Disclaimer: I have not read the previous chapters. You said it yourself, not a lot happens here. This is only a small, but appreciated scene of the story. Granted, taken ...

I haven't read the first chapter. Sorry. But anyway, wow! Shape-shifters! Where to begin, well...hm. The emotions throughout the chapter seem logical to the situation, and the flashback definitely flo

Hello, Cello! Review for you, my good fellow! Now, as a whole, the plot is...slow. Although it does make for some excellent character development, it's not really that interesting in ...

Happy Review Day! *Loads Gatling gun* I have not read the previous chapters, so I can't say much for the plot, other than that it's intriguing, and brings out Cora's ...

Disclaimer: I have not read the previous chapters. Well! I've no context for this scenario, but it certainly is interesting! The plot seems to be smoothly flowing here, though I'm ...

Happy Review Day! *loads shotgun* Alright, since this is a monologue, the most important factor would be its style. For the most part, I liked it. The sentences flowed smoothly ...

Disclaimer: I have not read the previous chapters. Well, you've certainly got some original terms floating around. I've no idea what the story is about, but what's been revealed so ...

Review Day. 'Nuff said. Now, to begin, it's clear that you have some interesting characters in a tense situation. They seem to hold a mutual dislike for each other, although ...

Well, I'm...surprised and impressed. You certainly know your characters well. It's easy to see Belon's personality shine through here. You've expressed that clearly with his annoyance at his advisers

Because Review Day requires no context. Okay, so...excellent job. What really stands out here is the Augnik boy's speech, which is, of course, painfully awkward. It's also able to draw ...

Since I reviewed the last chapter, I thought I might as well. And the plot thickens! My, how tensions rise. Things are getting more and more suspenseful as Edon and ...

Wow. I haven't read the previous chapters, but...good job. As for the plot, while this is a slow chapter, it's got a pretty intimidating scope of the story's events. It ...

Because action is awesome. *Deploys sunglasses* I don't quite know what's going on, but I like it! Coordinating an action scene like this really lets your raw literary talent shine ...