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Re: The Void - Chapter 1
Hi! My name is Rachel , but most people call me Mad . Plot, Pace and Point of View This was so powerful. You really have a gift... The pace ...
Jan 25, 2016 -
Re: The Girl
Hi! My name is Rachel , but most people call me Mad . Plot, Pace and Point of View The pace was good. The plot was very good and the ...
Jan 24, 2016 -
Re: Secrets Chapter 1
Hi! My name is Rachel , but most people call me Mad Plot, Pace and Point of View I confused as to what happened to her (at least give us ...
Jan 22, 2016 -
Re: The Abduction
Hi! My name is Rachel , but most people call me Mad Plot, Pace and Point of View I think in the last sentence you should go into more depth ...
Jan 22, 2016 -
Re: Acknowledgment
Hi! My name is Rachel , but most people call me Mad Wow! I haven't written a review in forever!!!! Plot, Pace and Point of View I loved this! I ...
Jan 14, 2016 -
Re: When the Dust Settles
Hi! My name is Rachel , but most people call me Mad This was amazing! It is rare that I see what I like to call perfect work on YWS. ...
Jan 8, 2016 -
Re: White Bird Ch.1
Hi! My name is Rachel , but most people call me Mad . Welcome to YWS. :) Plot, Pace and Point of View She lifted the hem of her long ...
Jan 8, 2016 -
Re: Preface: My Last Words
Hi! My name is Rachel , but most people call me Mad I have a feeling this is going to be short because I couldn't find much "wrong". Plot, Pace ...
Jan 6, 2016 -
Re: á–·lipped - Chapter 1
Hi! My name is Rachel , but most people call me Mad . Plot, Pace and Point of View I love the point of view. I feel like I'm watching ...
Jan 5, 2016 -
Re: My name is Winter, I'm popular but I don't think I want to be. (Prologue)
Hi! I'm here to review your work! Plot and Pace Since this is such a short chapter it was hard to get a feel for your character. Also I felt ...
Dec 28, 2015 -
Re: Glaciers: Prologue
This is really good but be careful when it comes to prologues. I know this from experience, that prologues do not necessarily have a good reputation among YWSers and readers. ...
Dec 23, 2015 -
Re: Just One Night
Hi! I'm here to review your short story :P Plot and Pace I'm confused I here the sames Eddie, Elliot and Thomas. I don't know who is who. I don't ...
Dec 18, 2015 -
Re: x - only empty
Hi! I'm here to review your work~ Plot and Pace The plot is very interesting and the pace is perfect. Characters I like the main character. She sounds intelligent and ...
Dec 18, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 2.2, The Name Game
Hi! :smt003 i'm here to complete my promise. I'm so so sorry I forgot to read this part :/ Anyway! Onto the reviewing: Plot and Pace I like where you ...
Dec 18, 2015 -
Re: Alexis and Nisha's Journey
Hi! I'm here to review this :P Nisha Jain: She seems realistic and someone I would personally be friends with. Alexis Europe: I think Alexis is my favorite of the ...
Dec 16, 2015