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First Impression: Well...this certainly was a very interesting preface, and also one of the more fitting things I've seen to be called a preface. Usually the prefaces on here would do better as prologues or first chapters, but this one truly feels like a preface. 
Anyway, now that I overused the word preface entirely too many time, let's get right to it.
Anyway let's get right to it,
Sometimes life’s hard, you know? You just look back on your day and you’ve realized you haven’t done anything, whether you’ve tried to get things done or just sat on your bed watching Netflix, either way you feel sluggish. That’s how I feel a lot. Mostly it is me sitting on my bed, but I just wish I would have done something productive. Even though you get to wonder how your life could possibly go on this way, you make a mistake and believe there is no changing it, you hear at least once in your life one quote. There’s always tomorrow.
Hmm...well this is hmm, a bit of a thought process to get started on I see...and this is meant to be a preface as well, so this is doubly interesting things to see. At any rate, this is starting out with some rather intriguing thoughts that don't seem to be of the happiest of varieties, so well, this is off to quite a start here.
But is there really? If someone told me that right now I’d probably laugh in their face.
I’ve made mistakes. Mistakes I’ll never be able to repent for. I always thought there will be a tomorrow. I can always do that next week, next year, when I’m an adult. But how do I know?
Okay...well the title of this is not making me think these thoughts could lead this one towards a good goal there, it certainly looks quite bleak at the moment...but also...this does sound like it could also be some sort of wakeup call for this person perhaps, about learning that you can't always keep postponing things...well I hope its the latter, cause the former is a truly terrible thing.
We all know that we’re going to die someday. Do we actually believe it though? Practically everyone looks upon their, thinking they’ll all have long lives. They don’t live life to the fullest because they always think they’ll have their entire life of eighty, maybe ninety years to go on adventures, make emends, do everything we believe we’ll have the opportunity to do. We don’t believe we won’t have enough time until we’re on the deathbed itself.
Well, this is certainly a tiny bit dark here, but also does sound like some good advice as well there. It certainly seems to be the tone of someone that's really seen life at its worst and just the way that this is all written really does bring out how this particular character maybe seeing the world at the moment.
When we finally realize the mistake we’ve made, the stupid procrastination that took us over, it makes everything that much harder. Sure some of us believe that they will be life after death, a moment where we are judged for the life we’ve lived. A time where we can learn what is right, and how to be perfect. But then it gets to the time where you can’t change your life, and that’ll be what happened.
Hmm, well this is certainly making that even more interesting here. It almost does look like potentially this is meant to be a bit of an inspiring message or perhaps just a sort of evaluation of this person's life by said person.
This isn’t a lecture, I’m one hundred percent guilty of everything I have said. This is a warning. A warning not to live the way I have, and realize at the last possible second that you did wrong.
I don’t want you to end up like me. At the edge of death and no way to get out of it.
This is my story, and how I got to where I am now.
Hmm...so it does appear to be advice, this is certainly quite fun to see here. It appears that this is someone that has lived a tough life and made a lot of mistakes but now on their deathbed due to natural causes or illness or something, they're sending out this advice from what they've learned and then the story to follow is their life story. Well, this is certainly a very interesting move to put a preface as something like that.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
Overall: Overall, this is a pretty cool piece of work that you got here. It certainly sounds like its leading towards a pretty interesting story. At any rate, this is about all I've gotta say for the moment.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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