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Re: Fauve
Hello! Charlotte just dropping in to give a quick (If not a little late) review. Firstly, I did enjoy this. I could just see the town and the girl who ...
Jun 28, 2017 -
Re: Love And Hate (Edit)
This was a very interesting poem. I am learning about the world wars at the moment so it was strange to find a poem on war. But, moving on. Firstly ...
Jun 28, 2017 -
Re: A wounded soldier
Hi! Charlotte dropping in for a quick review. Firstly, wow! The rhyming scheme for this was amazing! I love poems that rhyme and your one did, so of course I ...
Jun 27, 2017 -
Re: Love art
Hey! Charlotte dropping in for a review. This was an interesting piece. I like the story line and the description of Kei. There are a few nit-picks though. Firstly, as ...
Jun 26, 2017 -
Re: modern sonnet.
Hey! Thought I would check this out because it's a modern sonnet and they can be quite unusual. Anyway, I liked this. It was confusing to begin with but after ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Thief of my heart: Chapter 1
Hey there! Charlotte popping in for a review. Firstly, I would like to say that this piece was very interesting. It kept me captivated until the very end and it ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: My Name Is *New*
hey, Charlotte right here for a review. WOW. This was very honest. I love honest writing. To tell the world that you have depression and anorexia is brave. I love ...
May 8, 2017 -
Re: Unstoppable -- Chapter 9
HI! It's Charlotte here for a review. I was confused when this began. I haven't read any other chapters but this did interest me. I would suggest making the beginning ...
May 8, 2017 -
Re: Darkness Becomes Me
What's up? Charlotte here for a review. This was interesting. You classed it as a novel/chapter but there doesn't seem to be much of a novel there. This is short ...
May 5, 2017 -
Re: Writer's Block (Edited)
Hello. This is Charlotte dropping by for a review. Well, this was chilling. I swear it's every writers fear to be bombarded and then locked away by the terrible Writers ...
May 5, 2017 -
Re: Ghosts
Hey, Charlotte here for a review. I must say the beginning of this didn't catch my interest until the second paragraph. Starting with the tour guide droning on about a ...
May 5, 2017 -
Re: Strangers- chapter one
Nice. I really liked this. Your characters problems were real and many could probably relate to it. However that is where the realism ends. It is unlikely that someone with ...
May 3, 2017 -
Re: One Look
This was amazing! I loved your story line. The person you loved who no longer cares for you. It is heart wrenching and draws the readers in. People can relate ...
May 2, 2017 -
Re: I barely got out in time
Well, I really liked this. I have been considering writing a murder story but wasn't sure how to do so. If violence would be acceptable. This was a perfect example ...
May 2, 2017 -
Re: Divergent- A poetic diatribe.
Well. I must say I'm not too sure what to say about this. I am as big a book critique as the next person but I am also a book ...
May 2, 2017
