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Hey there! Change here for a review :) Do I deserve to be This? I like this line. It can apply to so many other things that people do, but ...

Heyo! This is fantastic! Very emotional. His child is guilty of the crime of innocence This line reads just a little awkward to me so I have two suggestions. The ...

Hey though there. Told you I'd be back so I'm going to review all your pieces with the least amount of reviews. :) Okay so the first stanza's ideas are ...

Here to review again! This is interesting. At first I thought it was going to take a deep but sad turn with the shadow seeming to be the only one ...

Two reviews already, great job! Here's another. Long time ago When I had no friends at all A short story happened Okay, so this second line about not having friends, ...

So I want to earn my next star, so I'm gonna review while I read. Kay? I really like the girl's perspective thing. I always think boys are challenging (maybe ...

You’re born to be a writer. You live to be a writer. You die to be a writer. That’s just the way it is. Don’t argue with me. If you ...

Hey :) Change here to review this piece. Okay after reading this over once I am not quite sure where to start. These sentences are very, very basic. Not one ...

I'm always wary of poems or pieces like them that are so short because I always think it's hard to convey a whole story or a deep emotion in such ...

You drew me in with the romance :) Her eyes were puffed and red, and so was her nose Instead of "and so was..." I think "as was..." might sound ...

Hey there. Change here to review your poem! To start off, I'd like to say the concept of your poem is really good. "I am fine" is just an automatic ...

Reviewy reviewy! but only one for youee:) It rhymes! It's a masterpiece! I'm actually not going to review this, well not in my usual way. I must admit I do ...

Hey there! Review time! :) I am insecure and with my potential I am blind I get what is trying to be said with this line, but the fact the ...

Hi! Change here for a review! First off, I like the title, good titles are definitely important. I was not expecting second person. I commend you in your ability to ...

Change here to review! :) You liken yourself to dirt. This is a great line, very real and raw. You’re worth my most prized memories, the kind I take down ...