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Re: Why I Cried Myself to Sleep Last Night (Existential Crisis)
You really opened up about this, which is a good thing. Not many talk much about it, but many think on a daily basis about what happens after death. I, ...
Jun 7, 2016 -
Re: Children
This was very sweet and pure:). Much like children are. Yet children are so much than just what that. They are imaginative and true, honest and innocent. Things like that, ...
Jun 7, 2016 -
Re: Broken Men and Makeup
This was an interesting poem. It had no rhyming that I could see,which made it kind of choppy, but it still spoke to me. Not many would ever associate make ...
Jun 7, 2016 -
Re: Home
The first line was a great start. It was a statement that showed how gorgeous everything had been, but something had destroyed it. I loved the imagery too, the way ...
Jun 7, 2016 -
Re: Heart of the Hotel
This was a really interesting piece. Though unfortunately, I didn't know as to what work you based this off of. I fell in love with the way you piece together ...
Jun 7, 2016 -
Re: Her Name was Ecstasy... she died
Your titles are on point.... bruh, you keep surprising me and this is just the second thing that I have read that you have written. It goes at a really ...
Jun 6, 2016 -
Re: Forget Me
Holy... omg, this was amazing. I wish you could put some music to this so I could hear how it would sound. Just the imagery that you used showed me ...
Jun 6, 2016 -
Re: Storm in a teacup
Hey there! Cate here:)... I love the name of your story. It leaves a question for the reader and gives a sense of mystery. Some people have trouble with naming ...
Jun 3, 2016 -
Re: The Dying Sun [NOVEL] Chapter 1
I love the plot! It's different from what I've read so far on here, and I really like it. And the picture of the guy is verrrry nice. I love ...
Jun 2, 2016 -
Re: The Drowners -3-
whoa.... just wow. Right in the feels. I barely know your characters and you've already gotten me feeling sympathy for them. You are a talented human being. One thing that ...
Jun 1, 2016 -
Re: Children of the Dawn- Prologue
Hey there! Hopefully I will be of some help. The descriptions are nice and serene, soothing almost. It gives the reader a sense of peace. Good job on that. I ...
Jun 1, 2016 -
Re: To The Core- Prologue
I liked this a lot. You should definitely keep this going! The plot looks good and your descriptions of the landscape made me feel like I was in cold weather, ...
Jun 1, 2016 -
Re: Time
At the beginning of the poem, there's only one little typo (if it is one)that I saw. The word 'matt' is supposed to be a 'matted'. When I saw that, ...
May 31, 2016 -
Re: Dystopia with no title (If you have ideas give me a shout in the comments)
Hey there! I loved the opening, it was action packed and it grabs the attention of the reader rather quickly, great job there. I was not confused at all with ...
May 30, 2016 -
Re: In the Absence of Stars - 2.4
Hey:) Cate here for a review, hopefully I can be sort of helpful! You started strong, in my opinion, I loved it. It was simple and basic and straight to ...
May 29, 2016
