CaptianRandom

Hey watchmeburn, CaptianRandom here, First of all welcome to YWS. Secondly, i thought this poem was good but i think it could be better, for me it went no where, ...

Hi Snoink, CaptianRandom here i didn't like this poem, i thought it was to depressing, to many remarks about dieing, even though that's the theme of the poem i thought ...

OMG Hibiscus, its CaptianRandom, I LOVED THIS POEM 10/10, its was great I'm speechless in a good way.... i loved the theme and the description. OMG i just cant say ...

Hey GagaBowie, CaptianRandom here. i was confused about this poem , i didn't really get the message or the point to what you have written, are you dead or something ...

Hi romance otaku, CaptianRandom here. sorry but i didn't really like this poem, i was confused about what you were talking about, i didn't really get it. It was long ...

Hi Marrzi, CaptianRandom here. i loved this poem, the truth, the reality, the depth, the..... everything. it was great length for what you are writing about and great spacing of ...

Hello LittlePetRock, my name is CaptianRandom. i liked this poem, i think it was good but not great i think you shouldn't rhyme it, i think that put it off ...

Hello SakuraFallsSweetly♥, my name is CaptianRandom. I loved this poem, the rhymes were relevant to the poem (unlike mine when the rhyming can be off) and length was great and ...

Hi Jon, I'm CaptianRandom. i really enjoyed this poem, it was sad and descriptive, i loved it, the spacing, the amount of words, very good poem. I'm just wondering if ...

Hey ROC, I LOVED THIS POEM, i loved the theme and the wording, just to be clear was it that she died cos that's what i got from it, i ...

Hey Artlover2227, my name is CaptianRandom. First of all i love art and what your writing is right, but some people have different perspectives of art, street art might be ...

Hi kingolions, its CaptianRandom I loved this poem, how yo described how people say they will die for you but they never say i will live for you, i loved ...

Hi Hibiscus my name is CaptianRandom, First of all i really did not like this poem, in all honesty you could have turned this poem into a short story, it ...

Hi kitrosemon13, im CaptianRandom. I LOVED this poem, it was fantastic, good length, space within the words and a lot of description. i lost myself in the fantasy of my ...

Hey Snoink, Captian Random here, i really thought this was history not poetry, like no offence, it was to short, and not any feel in it, but you did allow ...